Whatever Happened To Jordan

Wisdom, like the endosperm of a coconut, evolved,
Jordan developed in his self-consciousness day by day;
Though vices around virtues, like the galaxy, revolved,
He, like the Magi, keenly discerned and chose the right way.

Boyishness, as the rind of an orange or plum got peeled,
Fruitfulness in him, like wheat grain formation, peeped its head;
How lovely our once naughty Jordan's true self got revealed!
All those unchurched unaware identities he had shed...!

His son grew up like a pearl in a progressing oyster,
Scholastically and leisurely he's trained without fail;
He gives him freedom too; he's not a monk in a cloister;
Though naughty like his father, he grows up hearty and hale...!

The storm that blows violently can change into a breeze,
Who says a beast running about can never be at ease...?



18 June 2023
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Hawley Avatar
July 16, 2023 at 7:11 PM
You have some nice sharp images in this poem. Congratulations on you win in my contest.
George Avatar
June 24, 2023 at 8:58 PM
Loved the way you have depicted the transformation of an ugly worm into a beautiful butterfly! "The storm that blows violently can change into a breeze, Who says a beast running about can never be at ease...?" Love these closing lines.
Kiser Avatar
June 18, 2023 at 1:26 PM
Dynamic imagery and description of this man. Well-crafted.
Alex Avatar
June 18, 2023 at 7:47 PM
Thank you very much. May God Bless You!
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