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Whatever Happened To Jordan

Wisdom, like the endosperm of a coconut, evolved, Jordan developed in his self-consciousness day by day; Though vices around virtues, like the galaxy, revolved, He, like the Magi, keenly discerned and chose the right way. Boyishness, as the rind of an orange or plum got peeled, Fruitfulness in him, like wheat grain formation, peeped its head; How lovely our once naughty Jordan's true self got revealed! All those unchurched unaware identities he had shed...! His son grew up like a pearl in a progressing oyster, Scholastically and leisurely he's trained without fail; He gives him freedom too; he's not a monk in a cloister; Though naughty like his father, he grows up hearty and hale...! The storm that blows violently can change into a breeze, Who says a beast running about can never be at ease...? 18 June 2023 Whatever happened to "Jordan" Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Miranda Hawley

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Date: 7/16/2023 7:11:00 PM
You have some nice sharp images in this poem. Congratulations on you win in my contest.
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Date: 6/24/2023 8:58:00 PM
Loved the way you have depicted the transformation of an ugly worm into a beautiful butterfly! "The storm that blows violently can change into a breeze, Who says a beast running about can never be at ease...?" Love these closing lines.
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Date: 6/18/2023 1:26:00 PM
Dynamic imagery and description of this man. Well-crafted.
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Christuraj Alex
Date: 6/18/2023 7:47:00 PM
Thank you very much. May God Bless You!

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