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What You See

What you see is what you get, But what you don't see, you don't get. Because, you see, I have worked very Long and hard at hiding it away. I have built a wall in front of me, But I am learning that it's just 'a' wall, I can always walk around it.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 3/18/2011 5:53:00 PM
WOW this is very very deep. I like it:)))
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Date: 2/20/2011 4:05:00 PM
The late Flip Wilson's character of Geraldine came to mind as I read this little delight. Good writing.
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Date: 2/15/2011 6:00:00 AM
Or you can break through it. That's a lot more fun. Great job with this, Ellen!
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Date: 2/14/2011 6:47:00 PM
Well expressed thoughts on What you see, Ellen
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Date: 2/14/2011 6:30:00 PM
lol love the ending and enjoyed your write,..p.d.
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Date: 2/14/2011 2:37:00 PM
Good one.. Enjoyed...Glad that I chose this one to read this afternoon..Sara
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