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She kept a close eye on her child
He had his fist close to his chest
An adorable smiling toddler
Hard to track but she did her best

Whenever he came close to her
She said, "What you got there sugar?"
He opened up his hand and smiled
And then said,"It's a booger!"

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Date: 11/8/2019 12:15:00 AM
Just like a child, Pat, perfect poem ..
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Date: 11/9/2019 5:01:00 PM
Thank you Eve! I'm glad you liked it!....pat
Date: 11/7/2019 1:30:00 PM
Saw this on the Poetry Soup Home Page. It was the first poem shown, as well it should be!! After all, when someone has the incredible idea of rhyming sugar with booger --- #1 may be a bit on the low side of the valuation of that kind of talent. Hilarious, Pat! ~ Laughing all over my keyboard , gw
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Date: 11/7/2019 2:35:00 PM
Wow! Thank you doesn't seem like enough but Thank you very much, Gershon!...........Pat
Date: 11/5/2019 7:05:00 PM
lol... hehe... too fun... great write. Ann
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Date: 11/6/2019 2:46:00 PM
Thanks Ann, I appreciate that!......pat
Date: 11/4/2019 10:13:00 PM
beautiful poem// I enjoyed
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Date: 11/6/2019 2:46:00 PM
Thanks Mahtab. A true story. By the way that baby is 30 now!..........80)
Date: 11/4/2019 6:12:00 AM
Made me laugh! Thank you!
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Date: 11/4/2019 7:23:00 AM
Glad you liked it. Thanks for commenting!.....pat
Date: 12/24/2017 6:27:00 PM
Sounds about right. It could've been worse.
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Date: 12/25/2017 8:53:00 AM
Isn't THAT the truth!! Stuff like that is funnier looking back at it than when it actually happens sometimes.......Thanks for commenting Dale!..........pat
Date: 12/24/2017 9:29:00 AM
Lol, hopefully the surprised Mom had some kleenex close by! You'll never know what'll come out of a baby's mouth (or nose!) Very cute Pat!~Che :)
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Date: 12/24/2017 12:10:00 PM
A true thing that my wife's son pulled on her a long time ago!...............Glad you liked it....pat