What You Gave

What you gave was the humility
lost now in the starry universe,
dark and gray about to rain. 
A circle of stars shuttering in place,
shifting from season to space,
dancing in darkness. 

What you gave were these arms to
reach out and hold the world close
in an ever changing way, buoyant 
and feisty, or ready to give up. 
What you gave will always be alive
breathing into the surfaces of 
the universe.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Gibson Avatar
July 14, 2014 at 1:33 PM
Lovely write, Julie. Congratulations on your placement.
Callus Avatar
July 14, 2014 at 9:03 AM
This is lovely, Julie! A lot has been given here, and I believe nothing is expected in return. Congrats on a fine win. // paul
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