What You Felt In That Moment

deeper-day-dreaming. 

was he not a confident lover?

disheveled-darning-dominant.

confidence is not letting what may be disheveled in you get so deep that it dominates 

so by day, be daring.

dream.

he transformed into all she needed.

he was all she needed. 

cliched or not, it all happened for them overnight.

he made his great-grandparents proud

after explaining "what you felt in that moment"
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Clemons Avatar
July 28, 2016 at 7:17 PM
Deep poem, Chante, very vivid writing of that moment on subject. Enjoyable overall. Check out some my poems, might find some you like. Peace.
Reeves Avatar
August 7, 2016 at 9:15 PM
thank you so much! sorry for the late response! =)
Vincent Avatar
June 6, 2016 at 5:43 AM
A well-thought piece this one is... thanks for sharing.
Reeves Avatar
August 7, 2016 at 9:16 PM
thank you so much! sorry for the late response!
Fleming Avatar
May 29, 2016 at 4:42 AM
A deep poem, Chante...conjures up all manner of scenarios! My very best regards. :) john P.s A seven..
Reeves Avatar
August 7, 2016 at 9:16 PM
thank you!!
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