Eve Roper Poet Pantoum

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What Will Tomorrow Bring

Spinning wanderer of curious choice
hopes and dreams for a newborn tomorrow;
a rising outcry from a silent voice.
incipient life gaining strength, no sorrow.

Hopes and dreams for a newborn tomorrow;
no more wallowing over yesterday's,
incipient life gaining strength, no sorrow.
Indulge in forthcoming revolution praise.

No more wallowing over yesterdays,
a rising outcry from a silent voice.
Indulge in forthcoming revolution praise,
spinning wanderer of curious choice.

6/1/2017

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Jan Allison June 14, 2017 at 6:43 PM a beautiful pantoum Eve i will try and write one for your contest:-) hugs Jan xx

Dean Wood June 8, 2017 at 3:00 PM This is very well done Eve. "a rising outcry from a silent voice." Some great lines and rhymes in this beauty. - Dean

Winged Warrior June 6, 2017 at 9:11 AM After reading your gem of a Pantoum...me likes to try it lol...great job my friend...all the best...^WW^

Paul Callus June 4, 2017 at 3:17 AM We have to admit that the outcome of our future is determined by many things, but it is mainly our choices that will leave a marked impact on it. So, yes, let's put the past behind us and look forward with hope and faith. ~ This Pantoum is lovely and meaningful, Eve....well done! Warm regards // paul

Pandita Sietesantos June 2, 2017 at 10:21 AM This is an amazing write, my friend! First of all you did an awesome job with the form, then you excelled with the rhymes, and the flow was flawless! WOW! You set a high bar with this excellent piece! A-7 for sure! Hugs - Pandita.

John Lawless June 2, 2017 at 8:24 AM Eve ... love the opening and closing line....it could be the heading of my life....good job on the ever impossible Pantoum form.... Eve Roper June 2, 2017 at 8:50 AM Thank you, John, it really isn't hard.. once you get started.

Daniel Turner June 1, 2017 at 11:40 PM I have got to try this form, Mrs Eve. This is very well written:) Eve Roper June 2, 2017 at 8:48 AM Thank you,Daniel, it really is easy. Just repeat the lines in its order. ~*

Carole Duet June 1, 2017 at 10:35 PM Sounds political to me! Very interesting and clever, Eve. Eve Roper June 2, 2017 at 8:46 AM Thank you, Carole, I guess we have to become political if we are going to defeat our everyday wows.