What Will Tomorrow Bring

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Spinning wanderer of curious choice hopes and dreams for a newborn tomorrow; a rising outcry from a silent voice. incipient life gaining strength, no sorrow. Hopes and dreams for a newborn tomorrow; no more wallowing over yesterday's, incipient life gaining strength, no sorrow. Indulge in forthcoming revolution praise. No more wallowing over yesterdays, a rising outcry from a silent voice. Indulge in forthcoming revolution praise, spinning wanderer of curious choice. 6/1/2017

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Jan Allison

Date: 6/14/2017 6:43:00 PM

a beautiful pantoum Eve i will try and write one for your contest:-) hugs Jan xx

Dean Wood

Date: 6/8/2017 3:00:00 PM

This is very well done Eve. "a rising outcry from a silent voice." Some great lines and rhymes in this beauty. - Dean

Winged Warrior

Date: 6/6/2017 9:11:00 AM

After reading your gem of a Pantoum...me likes to try it lol...great job my friend...all the best...^WW^

Paul Callus

Date: 6/4/2017 3:17:00 AM

We have to admit that the outcome of our future is determined by many things, but it is mainly our choices that will leave a marked impact on it. So, yes, let's put the past behind us and look forward with hope and faith. ~ This Pantoum is lovely and meaningful, Eve....well done! Warm regards // paul

Pandita Sietesantos

Date: 6/2/2017 10:21:00 AM

This is an amazing write, my friend! First of all you did an awesome job with the form, then you excelled with the rhymes, and the flow was flawless! WOW! You set a high bar with this excellent piece! A-7 for sure! Hugs - Pandita.