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What Will Tomorrow Bring

Tomorrow is another lovely day,
For June brings bright flowers in profusion,
Lilies, pinks, and greens compose a nosegay
Or roses she'll get without confusion.

For June brings bright flowers in profusion,
Will she welcome my most fragrant bouquet?
Or roses she'll get without confusion.
May she accept my love and make my day?

Will she welcome my most fragrant bouquet?
Lilies, pinks, and greens compose a nosegay.
May she accept my love and make my day.
Tomorrow is another lovely day.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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De Beaulieu Avatar
October 30, 2025 at 11:10 AM
Hello Victor, You will not kn ow until tomorrow. Enjoy your day my frkiend. /Darlene/
Edmonds  Avatar
June 4, 2021 at 6:51 AM
What a lovely Pantoum for June Victor. The loveliest time of the year is when sweet roses appear, some in their summer clothes, some from where the wild rose grows… Belle
Proxenos Avatar
June 2, 2021 at 9:37 AM
I really really enjoyed your Pantoum Victor, you are excellent at most forms of poetry, I applaud you. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
Y. Avatar
June 2, 2021 at 7:58 AM
Hi Victor, What a beautiful and well written Pantoum. I found it to very romantic as well.The lovely flowers were a nice touch. Have a wonderful day my friend:-) Alexis
Nicole Avatar
June 1, 2021 at 7:31 PM
"What will tomorrow bring ?" Beauty, romance and the sweet caress, of everything, magical. This is so beautiful and tender. Love is in the air. May your heart soar, my dear friend. :) Brandy
Brul Avatar
June 1, 2021 at 2:07 PM
so lovely! In a form I haven't tried yet. You did brilliantly!
Buehler Avatar
June 1, 2021 at 11:27 AM
Flowers and romance make a wonderful combination. I think she'll accept the fragrant bouquet. This is a lovely pantoum, Victor. :D
Daniel Avatar
June 1, 2021 at 9:28 AM
Yeah, she will, who can say no to such a beautiful bouquet, Victor? Nice imagery:)
Rodrigues Avatar
June 1, 2021 at 9:03 AM
Lovely garden with its scent!
Roper Avatar
June 1, 2021 at 7:37 AM
Beautiful imagery and the feel of romantic love in June, Victor, a time she will accept your love. I enjoyed reading. Hugs Eve
Ricci Avatar
June 1, 2021 at 5:41 AM
Hello Victor - May June bring all of this and more. Yes, we all wonder what will tomorrow bring. So many mysteries so my questions. This is lovely poetry in every way. It was an honor to read this. Have a wonderful day. Enjoy poetry soup.
Pandit Avatar
June 1, 2021 at 4:51 AM
Joy of June blooms your poem, Victor. Beautifully done.
Poet Avatar
June 1, 2021 at 4:12 AM
A poetic masterpiece brimming with vital life hopes, Victor, a person's purpose for being here, is to assist and make one another happy, hope for a better day, and end the pandemic during June.
Cunningham Avatar
June 1, 2021 at 3:08 AM
Hoping it will bring sunshine and the end of the virus. We live in hope. Tom
Seeker Avatar
June 1, 2021 at 1:20 AM
I feel she will accept and make your day!
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