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What Will Tomorrow Bring

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Tomorrow is another lovely day, For June brings bright flowers in profusion, Lilies, pinks, and greens compose a nosegay Or roses she'll get without confusion. For June brings bright flowers in profusion, Will she welcome my most fragrant bouquet? Or roses she'll get without confusion. May she accept my love and make my day? Will she welcome my most fragrant bouquet? Lilies, pinks, and greens compose a nosegay. May she accept my love and make my day. Tomorrow is another lovely day.

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Beryl Edmonds

Date: 6/4/2021 6:51:00 AM

What a lovely Pantoum for June Victor. The loveliest time of the year is when sweet roses appear, some in their summer clothes, some from where the wild rose grows… Belle

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 6/2/2021 9:37:00 AM

I really really enjoyed your Pantoum Victor, you are excellent at most forms of poetry, I applaud you. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.

Alexis Y.

Date: 6/2/2021 7:58:00 AM

Hi Victor, What a beautiful and well written Pantoum. I found it to very romantic as well.The lovely flowers were a nice touch. Have a wonderful day my friend:-) Alexis

Brandy Nicole

Date: 6/1/2021 7:31:00 PM

"What will tomorrow bring ?" Beauty, romance and the sweet caress, of everything, magical. This is so beautiful and tender. Love is in the air. May your heart soar, my dear friend. :) Brandy

Jcb Brul

Date: 6/1/2021 2:07:00 PM

so lovely! In a form I haven't tried yet. You did brilliantly!

Evelyn Judy Buehler

Date: 6/1/2021 11:27:00 AM

Flowers and romance make a wonderful combination. I think she'll accept the fragrant bouquet. This is a lovely pantoum, Victor. :D

Joanna Daniel

Date: 6/1/2021 9:28:00 AM

Yeah, she will, who can say no to such a beautiful bouquet, Victor? Nice imagery:)

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 6/1/2021 9:03:00 AM

Lovely garden with its scent!

Eve Roper

Date: 6/1/2021 7:37:00 AM

Beautiful imagery and the feel of romantic love in June, Victor, a time she will accept your love. I enjoyed reading. Hugs Eve

Lisa Ricci

Date: 6/1/2021 5:41:00 AM

Hello Victor - May June bring all of this and more. Yes, we all wonder what will tomorrow bring. So many mysteries so my questions. This is lovely poetry in every way. It was an honor to read this. Have a wonderful day. Enjoy poetry soup.

Vijay Pandit

Date: 6/1/2021 4:51:00 AM

Joy of June blooms your poem, Victor. Beautifully done.

Sotto Poet

Date: 6/1/2021 4:12:00 AM

A poetic masterpiece brimming with vital life hopes, Victor, a person's purpose for being here, is to assist and make one another happy, hope for a better day, and end the pandemic during June.

Tom Cunningham

Date: 6/1/2021 3:08:00 AM

Hoping it will bring sunshine and the end of the virus. We live in hope. Tom

Unseeking Seeker

Date: 6/1/2021 1:20:00 AM

I feel she will accept and make your day!