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What Will the Wind Take

What the wind will uproots from the window of the heart if the moon light faded! What will scare the darkness when the seasons announce their mourning in the fall! Or when insomnia dwells eyes of the night And when the absence turns me to a winter that never die! What the wind will uproots from the emptiness?

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 10/29/2013 8:15:00 PM
Stopping by this one again... Fatima, a deep write... I'm going to be honest with you.. After reading many of your writes, I know you are one of the deepest poet from this site... a very unique style... thank you for reading a few of my poems... LINDA
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Fatima Nusairat
Date: 10/31/2013 6:38:00 PM
I do appreciate your opinion my dear friend..Linda I am so lucky to have friend like you <3
Date: 10/23/2013 8:57:00 PM
Fatima, , interesting Personifying Science poem.... congrats on the win..... Love Skat <3
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Fatima Nusairat
Date: 10/31/2013 6:34:00 PM
Skat_Love thank you my dear <3
Date: 10/22/2013 10:47:00 PM
another nice win Fatima. CONGRATULATIONS... always & forever~ LINDA
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Fatima Nusairat
Date: 10/23/2013 8:45:00 PM
Really I always be happy when i see around ..thank you my dear friend Linda <3
Date: 10/18/2013 5:29:00 AM
Congrats on the win in the contest, Fatima
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Fatima Nusairat
Date: 10/20/2013 8:48:00 PM
Dr Ram thank you so much
Date: 10/17/2013 10:57:00 PM
Thanks very much for this lovely questioning poem. It could be taken as a poem that turns science into a person but I think I need a bit more development. As is, it is missing a key contest requirement, the use of the personification form. I find this is compelling writing, so much wonder shared. I enjoy it despite the contest. Thanks so much for entering my contest.
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Fatima Nusairat
Date: 10/20/2013 8:53:00 PM
Sheri Fresonke Harper thank you for accepting my poem in your contest ..I do appreciated your complement .

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