What Will the Wind Take

What the wind will uproots
from the window of the heart
if the moon light faded!  
 
What will scare the darkness
when the seasons announce 
their mourning in the fall! 
Or when insomnia dwells eyes of the night 
And when the absence turns me
to a winter that never die! 
 
What the wind will uproots from the emptiness?
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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October 29, 2013 at 8:15 PM
Stopping by this one again... Fatima, a deep write... I'm going to be honest with you.. After reading many of your writes, I know you are one of the deepest poet from this site... a very unique style... thank you for reading a few of my poems... LINDA
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October 31, 2013 at 6:38 PM
I do appreciate your opinion my dear friend..Linda I am so lucky to have friend like you <3
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October 23, 2013 at 8:57 PM
Fatima, , interesting Personifying Science poem.... congrats on the win..... Love Skat <3
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October 31, 2013 at 6:34 PM
Skat_Love thank you my dear <3
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October 22, 2013 at 10:47 PM
another nice win Fatima. CONGRATULATIONS... always & forever~ LINDA
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October 23, 2013 at 8:45 PM
Really I always be happy when i see around ..thank you my dear friend Linda <3
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October 18, 2013 at 5:29 AM
Congrats on the win in the contest, Fatima
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October 20, 2013 at 8:48 PM
Dr Ram thank you so much
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October 17, 2013 at 10:57 PM
Thanks very much for this lovely questioning poem. It could be taken as a poem that turns science into a person but I think I need a bit more development. As is, it is missing a key contest requirement, the use of the personification form. I find this is compelling writing, so much wonder shared. I enjoy it despite the contest. Thanks so much for entering my contest.
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October 20, 2013 at 8:53 PM
Sheri Fresonke Harper thank you for accepting my poem in your contest ..I do appreciated your complement .
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