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what will i do?..

just a weary mortal making my way
thru this place we call world

one of these days i wonder
if i will be able to see the
aura that burned so 
bright ...
and how it pulled
you toward me

and i try, 
and you know
i have....

then the pain,
yes the pain
gives me away

i want to love you like
the used to days

and i pray,
dear God, just give
me one more time
to sleep in your arms

i want to stop
the worry

to stop the pain

is it my life to keep on
being ill ? ....  yet wanting with
ever fiber of my
body.....

just to dance.  

yes, just to dance
one last time.

janetta

for t.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 9/20/2009 7:22:00 AM
Congratulations on your lovely poetry being featured this week>>James
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Date: 9/15/2009 8:32:00 PM
Janetta - Congratulations on having your poetry featured this week – God Bless, MJ
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Date: 9/15/2009 1:37:00 AM
Janetta, congrats on having your work featured...Raul
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Date: 9/14/2009 3:27:00 PM
sweetly sad, congrats on being a featured poem.
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Date: 9/14/2009 12:26:00 PM
Hope your prayers were answered. Congratulations on having your poem featured this week. Enjoy your honor. Keep on writing! Karen
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Date: 9/14/2009 8:08:00 AM
This is a well deserved feature … what a creative, wonderful poem; your poem speaks for itself. You are such a great poet. Please keep writing and congrats on your poem being featured this week. Hope to read more of your wonderful poems. You are great friend! Adeleke
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Date: 9/14/2009 8:08:00 AM
This is a well deserved feature … what a creative, wonderful poem; your poem speaks for itself. You are such a great poet. Please keep writing and congrats on your poem being featured this week. Hope to read more of your wonderful poems. You are great friend! Adeleke
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Date: 9/14/2009 3:31:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved poetry being featured this week Janetta. Love, Carol
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Date: 5/3/2009 2:15:00 PM
Janetta, my belated congrats in making the semi finals...Raul
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Date: 1/2/2009 6:52:00 PM
Mom, You've got several more dances in you, I'm sure. Well. I know. Love Kim
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Date: 11/3/2008 5:05:00 PM
Thank you for your uplifting post on my blog. I was moved reading it. You are an inspiration. God Bless.
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Date: 10/20/2008 1:05:00 PM
Congratulations Janetta on your Honorable Mention in Mark's contest! Well done! Love, Shar
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Date: 10/17/2008 11:38:00 AM
janetta, as always you are beautiful, in all your words and the voice you present them in. Write me, bellasmomi@yahoo.com and I will write you back. You're in my heart always, I love you!!!!
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Date: 10/10/2008 12:55:00 PM
Touching write, Janetta. I hope you do dance. God Bless. Vince
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Date: 10/9/2008 12:40:00 PM
In God, there is always hope. I like the ending of this poem. Just keep on dancing even if it is just in your soul! Much to think about here. We all go through our challenges. Thank you for sharing your thoughts with us and for your kind words regarding my poem. Keep on writing! Karen
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Date: 10/9/2008 7:17:00 AM
Your words are your music, this is a very touching poem, Always, Christy
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Date: 10/9/2008 6:43:00 AM
What a huanting poem. I love the way it is constructed. Reading it, makes one think of falling downward through clouds. ~Peace~Gar Thank you for your kind reviews.
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