What We'Ve Come To

My name is unimportant 
because I only am one man
but if we stick together 
girl, I think I got a plan
the earth is rising
space is colliding 
and the world is falling down...
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Sousa Avatar
April 17, 2010 at 9:44 PM
:) i am speechless. wow.
Pickett Avatar
March 26, 2010 at 9:43 AM
I must agree!!!! A good pick up line indeed.....:JP]
A   Avatar
March 26, 2010 at 6:52 AM
The best pick up line I have ever read. good one
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