What We Leave Behind

Written: October 04, 2026, as A sample for the contest What we leave Behind. We do not leave our footsteps to the earth; the rain unthreads them, reed by reed, from stone. Nor does the house remember what we were— its walls absorb our voices, then grow lone. We leave the warmth that lingered in a chair, a photograph grown silver at the seam, the scent of roses suspended in the air, a half-remembered cadence in a dream. We leave the words we uttered without care, the wound they opened, and the scar that stayed; the kindness no one witnessed anywhere, the small reprieve a stranger’s grief was paid. We leave ourselves in those who knew our name: a gesture, an expression, a way of seeing; some ember smouldering beneath the ash of time, some unanswered question still becoming. Perhaps our truest legacy is not what lasts, but what, once touched by us, is changed— a life made gentler, briefly, by our passing; a darkness that remembers it was light.
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Andresen Avatar
October 7, 2026 at 2:33 AM
- So true and beautifully written :) - It is only the choices we make in life that matter for the mark we leave behind, Las :) - hugs
Buhagiar Avatar
October 7, 2026 at 1:44 AM
There is great contrast in this poem. What we leave behind is often a set of different ideas. Cleverly done.
Babbit Avatar
October 6, 2026 at 10:55 AM
Loved your poem, one never truly knows the impact of all we leave behind.
Hamilton Avatar
October 5, 2026 at 9:12 AM
this explores how we leave life Sotto taking us right to the curtain that covers life from death a well thought poem kudos my friend Shadow
Rolland Avatar
October 5, 2026 at 1:54 AM
very sensitive images and sensations, a great penning, enjoyed
George Avatar
October 4, 2026 at 10:35 PM
You are absolutely right dear friend. It is not the footprints we leave or the wealth we bequeath, but some little moments of happiness we give to others or some tiny points of light we spark in darkness... that's more important. A lovely poem full of meaning.❤️‍🩹
Legros Kelley Avatar
October 4, 2026 at 6:16 PM
You are the maestro of poetry Sotto, you write symphonies in your amazing poems, This is no exception, BEAUTIFUL,
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October 4, 2026 at 3:55 PM
A wonderful poem Sotto. If we make a life gentler by our passing, as you said, we have lived a life well blessed… Beryl
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