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What We Hear

courtship song tumbling
stream of notes, water on stones
love's sphere surfaces






Senryu composed July 20/2022

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Karen Croft

November 29, 2023 at 12:00 PM

Love the feeling!

Brian Sambourne

November 29, 2023 at 12:04 PM

Thanks very much Karen.

Dennis Spilchuk

September 13, 2022 at 2:07 AM

Sounds of the warbling brook. An idyllic senryu phrased beautifully.

Brian Sambourne

September 13, 2022 at 6:19 AM

Thank you, Dennis for your visit + positive take on my Senryu. Cheers, Brian

Gershon Wolf

September 10, 2022 at 7:32 PM

The image of 'water on stones,' so vivid in my mind, Brian. Kudos, Gershon

Brian Sambourne

September 10, 2022 at 7:41 PM

My appreciation for your stop by + thoughtful comment. I hope that all is well with you. Sincerely, Brian

Lisa Ricci

September 2, 2022 at 3:05 AM

Good Morning Brian. This is lovely. I enjoyed the theme and the imagery. Wonderful title as well. Thank you for sharing. Have a wonderful morning and day. Enjoy poetry and poetrysoup as well.

Brian Sambourne

September 2, 2022 at 5:39 AM

Thank you, Lisa for your thoughtful appraisal of my Senryu + kind wishes. May you enjoy happiness + good health. Sincerely, Brian

Sara Kendrick

August 24, 2022 at 1:06 PM

Reads like a good contender for Brian's contest. Way to go. Water tripping over stones does play its own music. Thanks for sharing and for visiting my page. Sara

Brian Sambourne

August 24, 2022 at 4:29 PM

Hi Sara Thanks very much for your vote of confidence. The small piece did place. Be well. Brian