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What We Hear

courtship song tumbling
stream of notes, water on stones
love's sphere surfaces






Senryu composed July 20/2022

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Karen Croft

Date: 11/29/2023 12:00:00 PM

Love the feeling!

Brian Sambourne
Date: 11/29/2023 12:04:00 PM

Thanks very much Karen.

Dennis Spilchuk

Date: 9/13/2022 2:07:00 AM

Sounds of the warbling brook. An idyllic senryu phrased beautifully.

Brian Sambourne
Date: 9/13/2022 6:19:00 AM

Thank you, Dennis for your visit + positive take on my Senryu. Cheers, Brian

Gershon Wolf

Date: 9/10/2022 7:32:00 PM

The image of 'water on stones,' so vivid in my mind, Brian. Kudos, Gershon

Brian Sambourne
Date: 9/10/2022 7:41:00 PM

My appreciation for your stop by + thoughtful comment. I hope that all is well with you. Sincerely, Brian

Lisa Ricci

Date: 9/2/2022 3:05:00 AM

Good Morning Brian. This is lovely. I enjoyed the theme and the imagery. Wonderful title as well. Thank you for sharing. Have a wonderful morning and day. Enjoy poetry and poetrysoup as well.

Brian Sambourne
Date: 9/2/2022 5:39:00 AM

Thank you, Lisa for your thoughtful appraisal of my Senryu + kind wishes. May you enjoy happiness + good health. Sincerely, Brian

Sara Kendrick

Date: 8/24/2022 1:06:00 PM

Reads like a good contender for Brian's contest. Way to go. Water tripping over stones does play its own music. Thanks for sharing and for visiting my page. Sara

Brian Sambourne
Date: 8/24/2022 4:29:00 PM

Hi Sara Thanks very much for your vote of confidence. The small piece did place. Be well. Brian

Harry Horsman

Date: 7/24/2022 7:22:00 PM

I'd like to add my congratulations here, Brian, to this wonderful winning poem, for which i'm not surprised, the senryu is superb.

Brian Sambourne
Date: 7/24/2022 8:35:00 PM

Greetings Harry, Thank you for your encouraging words of recognition. Most kind of you. Be well. Brian

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 7/24/2022 9:36:00 AM

Nature’s love song presented so beautifully in your senryu Brian. Congratulations on your wonderful win. Blessings xxoo

Brian Sambourne
Date: 7/24/2022 11:03:00 AM

Thank you, Connie, for your supportive note. I was surprised by the contest placement. Best wishes, Brian

Christuraj Alex

Date: 7/22/2022 8:56:00 PM

"love's sphere surfaces" - True. Beautiful. Congratulations!

Brian Sambourne
Date: 7/23/2022 8:19:00 AM

You are very fine fellow, Christuraj, in being so supportive of posted poems written by your fellow Soupers. Be well. Sincerely, Brian

Hilo Poet

Date: 7/22/2022 8:16:00 PM

An attuned suite per Handel, Brian, cheers on your win my friend, Aloha~William

Brian Sambourne
Date: 7/22/2022 8:42:00 PM

Very thoughtful of you to read my Senryu + leave an affirmative note. Best wishes, Brian

Sotto Poet

Date: 7/22/2022 12:17:00 PM

Brian, congratulations on your winner contest placement. You deserve it with this wonderful senryu.

Brian Sambourne
Date: 7/22/2022 12:38:00 PM

Much appreciation for your positive view of my small piece. Best wishes, Brian

Gary Radice

Date: 7/21/2022 10:57:00 AM

You certainly have a handle on nature's own water music Brian. A lovely senryu. Cheers - Gary

Brian Sambourne
Date: 7/21/2022 11:46:00 AM

Greetings Gary, Thanks very much for your thumbs up. Sincerest regards. Brian

Andrew John

Date: 7/21/2022 3:04:00 AM

The idea of love's own song, there as a stream of welcome notes. Thanks, Brian.

Brian Sambourne
Date: 7/21/2022 6:46:00 AM

My appreciation for your insightful note + stop by. Thanks Andrew. Cheers, Brian

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