What War -- Why Worry

Bombs dropping
Wives shopping

Guns blazing
Frats hazing

Troops shooting
Crooks looting

Tanks rumbling
Drunks stumbling

Ships sinking
Flirts winking

More killing
Steaks grilling

Blood flowing
Moms sewing

Wounds gaping
Teens vaping

Men missing
Lips kissing

Hordes dying
Pols lying...



        September 10, 2020
    Threes, Please Poetry Contest
        Sponsor: Beth Evans
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020


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Date: 9/19/2020 9:06:00 PM
Congratulations on your win, Gershon. Day to day life goes on, even in chaos. A super poem. Best wishes.
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 9/21/2020 7:26:00 PM
Thank you so much, Evelyn. :) gw
Date: 9/19/2020 7:28:00 PM
Your contrasting couplets are so sobering, GW. But this is the first time I've heard that politicians actually lie... say it isn't so! Great write, and congrats on your win ~ JW
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 9/21/2020 7:26:00 PM
Thanks for the comment, John. And by the way, it's not true that politicians don't lie... lol. :) gw
Date: 9/19/2020 7:05:00 PM
Nice gw. Why worry indeed? Congratulations on your placement! Linda
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 9/21/2020 7:25:00 PM
Thank you for noticing, Linda! :) gw
Date: 9/15/2020 12:51:00 PM
This is maybe the most profound poem I have ever read in my entire life. WOW!
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Date: 9/15/2020 5:48:00 PM
Why, thank you, Caren! Such an unexpected endorsement! :) gw
Date: 9/11/2020 2:20:00 AM
Life goes on and on. You convey the inevitability with an underlying feeling of sardonic acceptance. Nice one Gershon.
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 9/11/2020 1:46:00 PM
Bombs away; we shrug. As long as it doesn't touch us... Such is the malleable mind of man --- except for the saints maybe... Thanks, Geoffrey
Date: 9/10/2020 11:21:00 PM
Love how you've composed this Gershon, very creative. Tom
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 9/11/2020 1:45:00 PM
Thanks for the praise on this one. Trying my best on this end. Wishing you a great weekend, Gershon
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