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What they really want is to play fetch

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For:Picture Prompt Poetry Contest
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I must now write a limerick; Those dogs lined up is such a trick, It's just a feint To make me faint So they can nick my walking stick!

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Date: 5/1/2024 8:23:00 PM

This poem is a spontaneous animated limerick that shows your ingenuity. I enjoy the images.

Chetta Achara
Date: 5/1/2024 9:20:00 PM

Thank you. I have four dogs, so I kind of know what they would get up to.

Date: 5/1/2024 8:00:00 PM

Ha, ha! Great idea. Just offer them the carrot instead of your stick. G.L. in the contest! :) gw

Chetta Achara
Date: 5/1/2024 8:03:00 PM

Thank you

Date: 5/1/2024 2:51:00 PM

a witty response to the portrait poetry contest. I rather liked the last line. I, too, seldom write a Limerick...they're just not my forte

Chetta Achara
Date: 5/1/2024 3:37:00 PM

This was kind of fun to to write, but I seriously dislike Limericks.

Date: 5/1/2024 5:08:00 AM

Your limerick gives me a giggle.

Chetta Achara
Date: 5/1/2024 6:46:00 AM

Thank was the intention! BTW I think this is the first limerick I have written.