What the Snowman Knew

what the snowman knew
about the stars in the snow
hidden underfoot...
the sentinel sun’s hush money
good until the carrot falls

11/28/2018
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Faulkner Avatar
December 1, 2018 at 7:33 PM
Love the carrot line - all of it whimsical and charming!
Rodrigues Avatar
December 1, 2018 at 10:30 PM
Thank you, Michelle!
Green Avatar
November 29, 2018 at 12:11 PM
That was funny and sad at the same time picturing the snow man melting and his nose falling off.
Rodrigues Avatar
November 29, 2018 at 12:34 PM
Thanks!
Asbury Avatar
November 29, 2018 at 7:37 AM
Delightful! Carrot talk again... I ate one once and it was not nearly as good as my lasix surgery.
Rodrigues Avatar
November 29, 2018 at 8:29 AM
Cute comment, Carol! Thanks for reading!
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