Premiere Contest WinnerWhat the Sands could Save

Every November, Harlem hums
coquito chilling, collards cooking,
a holiday approaching
that never sat right with me.

Before the parades, the plates,
my mind slips past the pretty lies
we paint over pain
and calls it “Thanksgiving.”

I think about Columbus
the way they crown him a hero
when really
he sparked the unraveling
of my whole bloodline.
Taino shores stained red.
Africans dragged into ships.
A continent bent under the weight of his footsteps.

And every year,
I whisper the same wish:

“If only I could turn back time…”

That’s when the sand rises
lifting out the sidewalk cracks,
spinning into an hourglass storm.
Suddenly I’m in 1492,
staring at the moment
everything went left.

Columbus stands on his deck,
smug, boots tapping out the rhythm
of centuries of sorrow.
And my whole soul wants to stop him
one push,
one word,
one shift in the timeline.

But the sand flickers
and replaces him with worse.
A conqueror history hid
because his cruelty
couldn’t fit on clean white pages.
He doesn’t want gold.
He wants erasure.

The sand darkens.

Across the ocean, Africans fade
not freed,
just gone,
executed on their own soil
before they could ever become ancestors.

The Caribbean I know
Bomba drums,
Taino caves,
abuela’s laughter in Loíza
collapses into dust
so fast I begin fading with it.

I reach for Harlem
its stoops,
its music,
its cultures braided like my own DNA
but my hand slips through the city
as if I’m a ghost
in a world that never had a reason
to make me.

If I change the past,
I erase myself.
I erase my people.

The sand spins like it’s teaching me
with every grain.

Then suddenly
a softer shimmer.

The scene resets.
Columbus steps off the boat humble,
listening.
The Taino greet him without fear,
teaching him how to walk the land
without breaking it.

Years later, Africans arrive
not in chains,
but in hope.
By choice.
Bringing rhythm, language, strength,
building a true America
with the Taino
side by side.

The hourglass rights itself.
Harlem returns
alive, loud, imperfect,
but real.

And I breathe.

I can’t change the past.
But I’m the proof
that my ancestors made it through
anyway.
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Date: 12/7/2025 8:06:00 AM
Windy, I just read you poem. I almost couldn't breathe as I read it, because of the anguish, the fear, the longing and the beauty of your words. Congratulations!
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Date: 11/30/2025 1:48:00 AM
A big congrats!! I forgot about coming to your page, but I was surfing my fav poems tonight, and- wonderful poetry!! <3
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Date: 11/30/2025 1:28:00 AM
Windy, your poem is so inspirational. I love it.
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Date: 11/29/2025 6:46:00 AM
Windy, your poem is truly amazing and so worthy of your First Place win in the contest, well done, Constance ~
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Date: 11/27/2025 10:37:00 PM
Hi Windy. I think your poem is exceptional. A great read and beautifully structured. Congratulations. Cheers - Gary
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Date: 11/26/2025 8:27:00 AM
A Big Congrats! Much deserved!
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Windy Martinez
Date: 11/26/2025 10:34:00 AM
Oh wow, how exciting! Thank you so much!
Date: 11/26/2025 8:26:00 AM
Years of learning take place. History should not be erased. Slavery most clear in America, but it has always existed. Your poem is poignant, emotive, raw, real. How many have sold a person, traded their soul for their greed and power. Even more so, how many have repented and moved history along in the right direction..how many keep it going. Slavery today - does anyone care. I pray!
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Date: 11/26/2025 6:12:00 AM
Wow. What an epic poem. You illustrated so well how altering the past could produce unexpected, even disastrous results. Best to leave well enough alone is the lesson here. Congrats on your first place win Windy
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Tom Woody
Date: 11/26/2025 10:44:00 AM
No, thank you for gifting us with this. My only hope is it gets wider exposure
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Windy Martinez
Date: 11/26/2025 10:39:00 AM
Hi Tom, Thank you so much! I honestly entered the contest late yesterday after seeing it posted, and the prompt stuck with me. I kept thinking about time travel, about all the moments in my life and my family’s history I would want to change… and then realizing that even one small shift could ripple out in ways that might make things worse instead of better. That tension, wanting to fix the past but knowing how fragile timelines really are, is what inspired the poem. I was excited the moment it formed in my head, and even more excited to enter it. Thank you for orchestrating the contest and for taking the time to read and comment. I truly appreciate it. Windy
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