What the Mouse Saw

What the mouse saw

The elephant and the mouse travelled together
From being both young they would look out for each other
Especially through the desert storms and other inclement weather 
Both nights black blanket with diamond stars and a round white saucer on a 
string tether
And mornings pink horizon lifting from the earth’s crust to heat and light 
whatever your endeavour 
The mouse fed on grubs and bugs and he scurried quickly leaving no stone 
unturned watching always for the scorpion or the adder
The elephant ate the leaves from tall scrub trees and bushes green but he also 
had enemies because of the ivory he grew to defend from hunter gatherer
These ivory tusks to make ornaments for rich wealthy men who see there are less 
elephants living in scarcity attracts evil to me another mammal creature
We reach an oasis and drink from the mother’s cup then a shot was heard and 
the elephant went down as the mouse hid under a rock the men came and the 
elephant cried a tear that dropped on the earth then he died knowing humans will 
scour the world until there is no picture

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014



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Date: 7/17/2014 5:43:00 AM
So sad an ending I wish they would bring an end to this cruelty but with people willing to pay their are those who for a price will hunt their prey. Hugs Jan xxx
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Peter Kiggin
Date: 11/24/2014 8:14:00 PM
Can I prey on you by hunting you down and try to make use of your body with only my words to force you to earn money. A prostitute for all intensive purposes like the people you see in offices talking on phones mumbling scenarios to each other to keep the brain from rotting.
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