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pandemic pressures squeeze us all - even if you think you're immune.


 

You know, I used to be happy all of the time. what the heck happened? I used to go weeks without crying, I used to love going to school. In fairness, I liked real school - not the sad, sterile, anti-social, virtual experience. When I'm mad I get silly, then mean. I don't always know why - angry is the answer, but I don’t always get the subconscious analysis behind it. That's a bad day - I'm truly sorry. If I could step back, in those moments, and think - clearly - I'm about the luckiest person. I'm a hundred pounds of privilege - if we rounding up - but pressurized, stressed like a movie submarine in deep dive. I think I miss people - like in an assembly - before it starts - where a hundred conversations clash like the random patter of rain. That’s one of the sounds of joy. The civilized brain is soaked in the opinions, and shared experiences with others. These virtual, interactive shadows on flat screens can't fill the void. p.s. I write short stories too =]

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Date: 6/15/2021 6:54:00 PM
Another winner! "...where a hundred conversations clash like the random patter of rain". - such a precisely stirring simile. So well penned. Best wishes, Brian
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Anais Vionet
Date: 6/16/2021 7:55:00 AM
Thank you =]
Date: 11/29/2020 10:36:00 AM
Lockdowns must be difficult for Americans raised on canned TV laughter and other supporting backgrounds, but the sound of silence will always be of great comfort. Aloha! Rico
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Rico Leffanta
Date: 11/30/2020 10:08:00 AM
If you have not read, "The Diary of Anne Frank", perhaps you should! Aloha! Rico
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Anais Vionet
Date: 11/29/2020 3:53:00 PM
I think we’re more TikTok and YouTube than TV. How would YOU have done - as a teenager - sheltering in your house for an entire year? Can you even imagine it??????
Date: 11/29/2020 5:13:00 AM
Virtual is the future... but as you said, "These virtual, interactive shadows on flat screens can't fill the void." It's probably you that'll fill the void...Well done
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Anais Vionet
Date: 11/29/2020 3:41:00 PM
I think that once this lock-down is over I think people will avoid screen-time for quite some time.

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