What the Heart Wants,,,,

The HEART WANTS what the HEART WANTS,
    People say "Listen to your HEART."
But what if you can't HEAR it?
         Your MIND wants all these other things,
and then you CAN'T HEAR your HEART.
        I sit and CLEAR my MIND 
   I sit LISTENING to my HEART
 BUT it SAYS NOTHING
  it BEATS to NOTHING
 

         What am i suppose to do now?

By:Angel4eva

Plzz comment if u like my poem or have any thoughts and plzz rate
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October 29, 2011 at 7:41 PM
Brittany, congratulations on your featured poem of the week. Have yourself a wonderful night ;-) God bless,..p.d.
Johnson Avatar
October 22, 2011 at 9:19 AM
I hear what you are saying in this poem. Both the heart and mind can be determined in getting what they ask for!!!
Brown Avatar
October 13, 2011 at 9:47 AM
Congratulations on being featured Brittany. Love, Carol
Andrews Avatar
October 31, 2011 at 10:17 AM
thank you
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October 11, 2011 at 10:58 PM
(hadtah rate!sorry!) :D
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October 11, 2011 at 10:56 PM
True that! I liked the last 3 lines! AWESOME and TERRIFIC D. W. Breidenthal "a positive Poe"
Andrews Avatar
October 31, 2011 at 10:17 AM
those are my fav :) and thank you
Dye Avatar
October 11, 2011 at 5:23 PM
love your work and what you touched on is so true, keep doing what you do!!!
Andrews Avatar
October 31, 2011 at 10:17 AM
will do :) and thank you
Sharma Avatar
October 11, 2011 at 6:14 AM
really god.. short but sweet!!!
Mehta Avatar
March 30, 2011 at 8:28 AM
Nice quaries quite thought provoking..one has to heat the heart to listen i.e. the warming up, brittany
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