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What the Eye Sees the Heart Cannot Forget

To beseech thy comeliness of my dreams

Once a long time ago, weaved with mine eyes

I miss those moments once so long ago

Two intent basking under shadowed oaks

Breathe;     ride upon the wind and taste the dew

Wandering through admittance of the wild

    Oh, so quiet whispers to not arouse 

Intervolve nature's sedated presence

Within the wooded lush verdant grassland

Sapphire river always flowed full of life 

Seeking beyond the yielding downward path 

My heart still feels those times spent in the warmth



3/3/2017


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 - Poetry Contest : WHAT THE EYE SEES THE HEART CANNOT FORGET !!!
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Kimathi Avatar
March 28, 2017 at 4:00 AM
Your poem pulsates with enchantment!! Congrats Eve, for your win in the contest!! ;-)
Rodrigues Avatar
March 23, 2017 at 9:27 PM
Congrats, Eve! Love the Sapphire River!
May Avatar
March 23, 2017 at 8:04 AM
Congrats on a fine win Eve
Horne Avatar
March 5, 2017 at 5:48 PM
just so beautiful
Trifiatis Avatar
March 4, 2017 at 11:54 AM
Admirably writing dear, Eve! A real whisper of poetic breeze! A seven! Hugs
May Avatar
March 4, 2017 at 8:02 AM
Beautiful write Eve.. GL in the contest
Lamoureux Avatar
March 4, 2017 at 7:16 AM
Sometimes you don't need a brush to paint a beautiful picture. This is one of those times.
Dietrich Avatar
March 3, 2017 at 7:22 PM
wonderful, Eve. I did mine on that picture too. It is an inspiring picture and you came up with a heartfelt poem from it!!
Murray Avatar
March 3, 2017 at 4:55 PM
Such lovely language in this Eve. So romantic.
Onclaud Avatar
March 3, 2017 at 2:36 PM
ohh, you bring me me to this lovely scene with remarkable poetic visuals, eve... wow..huggs
Green Avatar
March 3, 2017 at 1:39 PM
Incredibly beautiful Eve. This one sure does warm the heart
Sands Avatar
March 3, 2017 at 1:36 PM
Very nice Eve! :)
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