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English quintain I’m leaving, going far away and when I’m through, I will return. But meanwhile, mind my vineyard, stay. I’m staking out a risk to earn; It is for you, to try and learn. I lease to you my private land which I have hedged. I’ve built a tow’r so you may guard my kingdom grand. Till I come back, you are in pow'r. I will come back, an unknown hour. Time lingers on, I send trustees to test the fruit; the vintage won. The tenants stone and wound all three; more were dispatched , more harm was done. They’ll show respect, I’ll send my son. Imprudent keepers of my lease imagined I was surely dead. They saw a chance the land to seize. My heir’s demise they thought ahead would free the land to tenants’ stead. This is a story Jesus told a parabolic sermon heard. The tenants’ logic had no hold; God’s kingdom soon would be transferred from Jew to Gentile. Thoughts are stirred. written by Reason A. Poteet first posted at Poetry Soup – 3 Feb 2015 Iambic tetrameter – an English quintain for Giorgio’s contest: Structured forms-Iambic verse - Recite and analyze a fictional event inspired by a biblical parable, Mark 12:1-12

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Date: 2/27/2015 10:34:00 PM
Reason, CONGRATULATIONS, on your Win :-) ~SKAT~
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Date: 2/24/2015 7:00:00 PM
This is such a wonderful write, and winner...plus a joy to read
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Date: 2/24/2015 3:13:00 PM
a superb write - many congrats on your win Reason:-) Hugs jan xx
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Date: 2/24/2015 7:48:00 AM
Technically perfect. Excellent story telling. Wonderfully woven. Congrats.
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Date: 2/24/2015 1:25:00 AM
Reason a superb write it is n a wonderful win! Big congrats !
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Date: 2/23/2015 10:13:00 PM
Congratulations on your 1st Place win, Reason, for your outstanding poem so well written. Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 2/13/2015 12:25:00 PM
Reads like a winner to me..Great Biblical story told in poetic form..Enjoyed reading today..Sara
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