What Should I Write Next?

Sulphurous moments, shadowed
beneath natures natural defences 
Tenderly swaying, the coconut palm 
leaves transmute devising my fan blades
Refrigerant elegance appreciated greatly 
chilled iridescent cocktails assuage  
My acousma heightens as the waves lash 
such a lovely sound, to woolgather
To think about your next write, possibly 
let us face it, we all do it x
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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January 29, 2009 at 6:24 AM
Nice write, each picture painted seems so real, it get to me. Welcome to the soup. ~Jen~
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