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You read poetry for the survival that filters through its lines Poetry that promises healing no matter wars in distant lands Poetry's brash cracks of hope as the planet veers off kilter in disarray with lines idling, a narrow gush of pleasure Poetry with a script of heroes that wipes away the mess of life, earth's crowded house of frenzy Poetry with multi layered meanings most a fog, like digital tech updates Poetry to sanitize the world, which it won't Poetry to restore the thin crust of political civility, which it doesn't And if you're the last person to see the light, poetry won't save you Still your need to read poetry expands a validation of landscapes unseen a lighthouse in a world of complications for sometimes verses lift your thinking for sometimes lines breath through you. Poem revised: May 5, 2021

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Date: 4/17/2021 12:49:00 PM
Hello Brian Sambourne, as for me I enjoyed the whole poem. I am glad to come across this poem. It will be my fav. enjoy your day my friend.
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 4/17/2021 2:59:00 PM
Hello Brian Sambourne, well \i think it should have won the contest. I am happy that my comment made your day. Thank you. Be well to my friend.
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Brian Sambourne
Date: 4/17/2021 1:05:00 PM
Hello Darlene Thank you kindly for your positive note. It made my day, especially as this poem received an NA in one of the contests. Be well always, Brian
Date: 1/28/2021 3:44:00 PM
i've been reading a few more of your poems, you're very talented, especially with free verse..i hope you'll enter more of my contests
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Brian Sambourne
Date: 1/28/2021 4:56:00 PM
Thank you, Charlotte. Very kind of you to provide much valued encouragement as I have read your work, too, and it is exceptional. Best wishes, Brian
Date: 11/15/2020 2:17:00 PM
I like the last line. I think with some poets the lines come from somewhere other than themselves. Thanks for the visit to my page. Sara..I like this one.
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Brian Sambourne
Date: 11/15/2020 9:20:00 PM
Hi Sara Very kind of you to leave a message. I did discover gems on your poetry page. Be well. Sincerely Brian

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