What On Earth Is Wrong With You

“Friends” is what she wanted to do But no, no, no, you needed to Profess your love through and through She already knew what you would do ~What on earth is wrong with you~ “Friends” is what she wanted to do She knew being alone was not easy for you You grab hold of whatever’s new To get you through lonely nights and early morning blues ~What on earth is wrong with you~ But no, no, no, you needed to Lie and deceive and try to juggle two But yet again she saw right through The games you played but she had a point to prove ~What on earth is wrong with you~ Profess your love through and through She listened and played your game too Giving you just enough while her plan she brewed She kept playing you and you had not a clue ~What on earth is wrong with you~ She already knew what you would do You simply could not choose Her kindness and friendship you abused Her love and emotions you continued to use ~What on earth is wrong with you~ Friendship is all she ever wanted with you She knows you better than you think she do All along she watched your moves All along she had another dude too ~What on earth is wrong with you~ How does it feel to be used How about being one of two Why do you look so confused You fell in love and her point she proved Now who’s the one with the broken hearted blues ~What on earth is wrong with you~ Lay
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010


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Date: 12/26/2010 9:43:00 PM
such sad notions in your write, though it seems you kept a level head and knew what you wanted and needed,,a great write especially for my first from you,,definately I will read more,,,Blessings..Cecil,,,Welcome to the Soup.
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Date: 12/25/2010 9:40:00 PM
I'd ask that same question, myself, Lay! Hope you had a great day with family and the girls. I got hit with a virus so mine was not as I'd wished! Going to be early again! lol Take care. Will catch up with you later. Love, Audrey
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Date: 12/25/2010 8:44:00 PM
this has so much wisdom and sadness. i am at this point right now and yet i know i don't want to be alone. but this will add to my resolve to be wise in chosing. thank you for your kind comment. and this was put together very well! T. S.
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