What Means More Mty

items in my container of memories playbill for "Les Miserables" that Dad enjoyed reminder of ignoble government Jean Val Jean’s quest for justice fugitive from the merciless Javert outdated cell phone that’s priceless forever I’ll carry it; this cannot be lost inbox carries my father’s last message to me “Happy New Year, Baby,” were his words just 30 minutes before his fatal stroke publication of Dad’s obituary green light for thieves to trash his house tearfully driving 250 miles, hoping to erase their indignity televisions, heirlooms and appliances stolen but Dad’s desk held items of greater value many awards for the Senior Olympics five-mile race pencil my CPA father chewed and broke dreaded bifocals that caused Dad consternation the only items thieves left behind were those that bring Dad closer to me
*June 20, 2019 Contest: More to Me Sponsor: William Kekaula
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Warrior Avatar
June 27, 2019 at 9:28 PM
Congrats!! on the win my friend...heartfelt verse Carolyn...^WW^
Gauthier Avatar
June 27, 2019 at 2:16 PM
Carolyn, congrats on your most deserving win. What a touching poem. A FAVE for me. I still have a lump in my throat.
Watson Avatar
June 27, 2019 at 11:57 AM
Carolyn, thank you for sharing what must have been a really traumatic time regarding the burglary, and for giving us a flavour of what was obviously a very special relationship in your life. Congratulations on your win.
Kelii Kekaula Avatar
June 27, 2019 at 11:13 AM
My heartfelt thanks for your entry to my sponsored contest and indeed, my compliments to your placement, Aloha ~ William
Meier-Hans Avatar
November 3, 2014 at 10:02 PM
Congratulations on your win Carolyn. Heartbreaking. This horrible act was happening in the area where I live. When the family was at the funeral they would break in. What kind of animals do such things?
A. Sharma Avatar
November 3, 2014 at 10:36 AM
Carolyn I will always love ur this awesome write my friend! Emotions portrayed so perfectly express your love for him! Congrats on huge win!
Gibson Avatar
November 2, 2014 at 7:01 PM
Caroline, I enjoyed this when you first posted it and still love reading it. Congratulations.
Yvonne Avatar
November 2, 2014 at 8:28 AM
Another great write from you Carolyn Congratulations on your win good luck on the next round of this challenge.
Guzzi Avatar
November 1, 2014 at 3:25 PM
Ahh neither of us thought of 9/11! Phew! I wnet mystery you went personal, I hope all is well- miss you! Debbie Congrad's on your win! Light & Love
Allison Avatar
November 1, 2014 at 1:29 PM
Oh I found this so sad and so emotional a write Carolyn but memories can never be taken away:-) Many congrats on your win. hugs jan xx
A. Sharma Avatar
October 1, 2014 at 12:05 PM
Extremely touching write Carolyn! Glad that something no one could steal n the priceless valuables n the memories r still alive n are a constant source of joy! I can relate to this! Great work!
Manassian Avatar
October 1, 2014 at 11:11 AM
Oh....people can be so....inhuman. I'm touched by your write, my dear. Some things are priceless due to their sentimental value...I'm glad your memories of your dad and the items you recovered bring you joy.
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October 1, 2014 at 10:01 AM
I have read it several times. I have discovered different shades of your emotional journey through the stanzas. Splendid. Hugs!
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