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What makes you feel

*Entry for What makes you feel poetry contest.

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#2

The tide took my friend away, leaving the salt deep in my wounds to stay

Heidi Sands

4/3/25

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Crystol Woods Date: 4/13/2025 12:51:00 PM Congratulations on the win! Xo Login to Reply Heidi Sands Date: 4/13/2025 5:35:00 PM Thank you Crystol :)

Paula Goldsmith Date: 4/10/2025 10:52:00 AM Back with Congratulations. I enjoyed reading this wonderful Monoku write again. Have a lovely day with your win............ Login to Reply Heidi Sands Date: 4/10/2025 2:51:00 PM Thank you Paula. I appreciate your support. Blessings :)

Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 4/10/2025 1:12:00 AM - Woow, Heidi ... this one touched my heart ... congratulations on your top first place in the contest :) - hugs Login to Reply Heidi Sands Date: 4/10/2025 5:03:00 AM Thank you very much for your kind comments and support. I hope you have a good day :) hugs

Unseeking Seeker Date: 4/9/2025 9:16:00 PM Deeply touching. Warmest congratulations on your trophy win, Heidi Login to Reply Heidi Sands Date: 4/9/2025 10:37:00 PM Thank you. I appreciate your comment :)

Evelyn Judy Buehler Date: 4/9/2025 6:59:00 PM Congratulations on your trophy win, Heidi. Your eloquence touches the heart. Login to Reply Heidi Sands Date: 4/9/2025 8:26:00 PM Thank you very much Evelyn :)

Joseph May Date: 4/9/2025 5:58:00 PM Congrats on your top ewin Heidi Login to Reply Heidi Sands Date: 4/9/2025 6:12:00 PM Thank you Joaeph :)

I Am Anaya Date: 4/9/2025 5:17:00 PM Congratulations on your trophy win, Heidi, It's you day! Enjoy Login to Reply Heidi Sands Date: 4/9/2025 5:28:00 PM Thank you very much. It has certainly made my day! :)

Gershon Wolf Date: 4/6/2025 8:26:00 PM Ooh. You rubbed it in there, Heidi. Login to Reply Heidi Sands Date: 4/7/2025 4:56:00 AM Oohhh. Thank you for commenting Gershon. :)

Kim Rodrigues Date: 4/6/2025 11:01:00 AM Takes a long tine to wash the wound. Login to Reply Heidi Sands Date: 4/6/2025 5:10:00 PM True Kim. I appreciate your comments. I hope all is well :)

Darlene De Beaulieu Date: 4/5/2025 3:13:00 PM Helloo Heidi, yes it hurts when a friend passes away. One day we will meet our friends again. Hugs./Darlene/ Login to Reply Darlene De Beaulieu Date: 4/6/2025 9:57:00 AM Hello heidi, Your welcome . Hugs. .Darlene/ Heidi Sands Date: 4/5/2025 4:40:00 PM True Darlene. Yes. Thank you for you kind comment. Hugs. :)

Mike Gentile Date: 4/5/2025 5:38:00 AM Heidi, your Monoku, so creative in its use of the ocean and its remainder, says it all! Good Luck and Happy Saturday xxoo Login to Reply Heidi Sands Date: 4/5/2025 7:44:00 AM Thank you so much Mike. Happy Saturday :) xxoo

Paula Goldsmith Date: 4/4/2025 11:13:00 AM What a wonderful yet sad Monoku write. I enjoyed reading it. "Good Luck" We both did this one. Have a lovely day and weekend........... Login to Reply Heidi Sands Date: 4/5/2025 7:43:00 AM Thank you Paula. Have a great weekend :)

Subimal Sinha-Roy Date: 4/3/2025 4:54:00 PM It's a deep loss. Nicely penned, Heidi. Login to Reply Heidi Sands Date: 4/3/2025 5:25:00 PM True, it is. Thank you Subimal :)