Heidi Sands Poet Monoku

What makes you feel

*Entry for What makes you feel poetry contest.

Sponsor:  Malabika Ray Choudhury



#2

The tide took my friend away, leaving the salt deep in my wounds to stay

Heidi Sands

4/3/25

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Crystol Woods April 13, 2025 at 12:51 PM Congratulations on the win! Xo Heidi Sands April 13, 2025 at 5:35 PM Thank you Crystol :)

Paula Goldsmith April 10, 2025 at 10:52 AM Back with Congratulations. I enjoyed reading this wonderful Monoku write again. Have a lovely day with your win............ Heidi Sands April 10, 2025 at 2:51 PM Thank you Paula. I appreciate your support. Blessings :)

Anne-Lise Andresen April 10, 2025 at 1:12 AM - Woow, Heidi ... this one touched my heart ... congratulations on your top first place in the contest :) - hugs Heidi Sands April 10, 2025 at 5:03 AM Thank you very much for your kind comments and support. I hope you have a good day :) hugs

Unseeking Seeker April 9, 2025 at 9:16 PM Deeply touching. Warmest congratulations on your trophy win, Heidi Heidi Sands April 9, 2025 at 10:37 PM Thank you. I appreciate your comment :)

Evelyn Judy Buehler April 9, 2025 at 6:59 PM Congratulations on your trophy win, Heidi. Your eloquence touches the heart. Heidi Sands April 9, 2025 at 8:26 PM Thank you very much Evelyn :)

Joseph May April 9, 2025 at 5:58 PM Congrats on your top ewin Heidi Heidi Sands April 9, 2025 at 6:12 PM Thank you Joaeph :)

I Am Anaya April 9, 2025 at 5:17 PM Congratulations on your trophy win, Heidi, It's you day! Enjoy Heidi Sands April 9, 2025 at 5:28 PM Thank you very much. It has certainly made my day! :)

Gershon Wolf April 6, 2025 at 8:26 PM Ooh. You rubbed it in there, Heidi. Heidi Sands April 7, 2025 at 4:56 AM Oohhh. Thank you for commenting Gershon. :)

Kim Rodrigues April 6, 2025 at 11:01 AM Takes a long tine to wash the wound. Heidi Sands April 6, 2025 at 5:10 PM True Kim. I appreciate your comments. I hope all is well :)

Darlene De Beaulieu April 5, 2025 at 3:13 PM Helloo Heidi, yes it hurts when a friend passes away. One day we will meet our friends again. Hugs./Darlene/ Darlene De Beaulieu April 6, 2025 at 9:57 AM Hello heidi, Your welcome . Hugs. .Darlene/ Heidi Sands April 5, 2025 at 4:40 PM True Darlene. Yes. Thank you for you kind comment. Hugs. :)

Mike Gentile April 5, 2025 at 5:38 AM Heidi, your Monoku, so creative in its use of the ocean and its remainder, says it all! Good Luck and Happy Saturday xxoo Heidi Sands April 5, 2025 at 7:44 AM Thank you so much Mike. Happy Saturday :) xxoo

Paula Goldsmith April 4, 2025 at 11:13 AM What a wonderful yet sad Monoku write. I enjoyed reading it. "Good Luck" We both did this one. Have a lovely day and weekend........... Heidi Sands April 5, 2025 at 7:43 AM Thank you Paula. Have a great weekend :)

Subimal Sinha-Roy April 3, 2025 at 4:54 PM It's a deep loss. Nicely penned, Heidi. Heidi Sands April 3, 2025 at 5:25 PM True, it is. Thank you Subimal :)