What makes you feel

Topic 2 feeling sad 

Losing my soulmate and my best friend - the feeling of loss never ends.
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July 21, 2025 at 7:32 PM
I cannot even fathom John. Experiencing loss is not the same as losing a mate. I have experienced loss, but I have never lost a mate. I pray you have moments of peace <3
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May 10, 2025 at 3:52 AM
I cant even imagine John and l don't want to….l have been with my husband since teenagers and the thought of losing him l can’t bear. My heart goes out to you..your poem touched my heart ….few words by message mighty…..Sending a cuddle your way…Debx
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May 16, 2025 at 9:54 AM
Hopefully you and your hubby will have many more happy years together Deb,sending you my love and best wishes God bless.
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April 25, 2025 at 11:37 AM
How awful. I tried to encourage people in your face that we live among the living, not among the dead, no matter how much we love them. My husband died over 40 years ago. When was I supposed to do?? I learned to love again and live again and give again, but I don’t live in the dark space anymore. Life is so demanding there were other issues going on thereis a world at stake, my husband taught me joy, and he would not want me living sad. Pangie
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May 6, 2025 at 6:45 AM
Answer to your question, not doing well,,w as in emergency last week, eye MD today, 5/6/2025
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April 25, 2025 at 11:49 AM
Hi Pangie I hear you loud and clear, I was 63 when my wife passed away, I still feel her presence today, hope your keeping well sweetheart. xx
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April 14, 2025 at 10:24 AM
Sorry about your loss John, that's sad.
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April 14, 2025 at 10:55 AM
Thank you David have a lovely evening.
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April 13, 2025 at 5:22 PM
Thanks John, there's a very important lesson in all of this. If we have comments to make to our loved ones, we should not delay. Life is short and we're just a momentary blip on the cosmic radar screen. I hope you have inner peace and some joy knowing that you're considered very thoughtful and smart here!
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April 14, 2025 at 9:04 AM
Hi Duke, as you say life is short, losing your soulmate is devastating, me and my wife often spoke about dying, I always hoped God would take me first, but it wasn't meant to be.
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April 13, 2025 at 11:52 AM
Loss of a friend is never forgotten. Today I had a hospital appointment. I was told that a friendly nurse is very sick, It spoilt my day.
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April 13, 2025 at 11:59 AM
Sorry to hear that Victor, hopefully the nurse will get better God bless.
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April 9, 2025 at 9:44 PM
It is a void dear poet, nothing can ever fill it. Your monoku is heavy and true. well said.
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April 11, 2025 at 9:17 AM
So true thriveni, thank you for your visit and comment.
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April 8, 2025 at 8:49 PM
John this is something I don’t even want to experience….so sorry for the loss of your soulmate and best friend.
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April 9, 2025 at 10:48 AM
Hi Pace sadly it's something we all have to experience in our life time, wishing you and your soulmate many more happy years together.
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April 8, 2025 at 8:50 AM
Hello John, Oh so well said with great sadness. My wife and I have been married for 43 years and another 43 years would not be enough for she truly is my soulmate by all measures. Spring Blessings, My Friend, Daniel
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April 8, 2025 at 10:42 AM
Hi Daniel, hopefully you and your dear wife will have many more happy years together, sadly mine was not to be.
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April 5, 2025 at 4:19 PM
Hi John. Luckily, our soulmates believe are i n enough our soulmares are in a better place. And God gives them a job to do so don’t think they’re pining for us. I don’t think so,, they have a job to do..not worry about when they’re going to see us? But we on earth miss them don’t we? It took me a while to get over that loss, but I don’t live with loss. I live with gratitude that I have him my life.. so what I feel is Joy and satisfaction both. I don’t know if that makes any sense? Pangie
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April 6, 2025 at 2:06 AM
Hi Pangie I understand where your coming from, I do believe our departed ones are in a far better place, have a lovely day Pangie God bless you. xx
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April 4, 2025 at 8:57 PM
Very sad; I can only imagine the sense of loss. Fortunately, my wife and I are still together, but...we are at that age now, one day at a time. Very heartfelt read.
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April 5, 2025 at 7:19 AM
Hi Joe everyday is a bonus, wishing you many more happy years together God bless.
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April 4, 2025 at 11:51 AM
Can imagine how hard it is to lose that special someone brother John, thankfully the happy memories live on… Sis Beryl
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April 4, 2025 at 12:13 PM
Hi sister Beryl it's been a struggle, I treasure every memory,hope everything is going well for you and Alan.
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April 4, 2025 at 10:34 AM
Gosh this hurts my soul, reading it, feeling the grief and loss that youv expressed in just few syllables! Sigh! I cant evn imagine the hurt and pain. Youv written very well! Pleasure reading you today! Best wishes in the contest. Sending you light always dear john
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April 4, 2025 at 10:47 AM
Thank you for your heartwarming comment Ink have a lovely evening.
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April 4, 2025 at 10:14 AM
Hello John Read, That is because she was your soul mate. Enjoy your day my friend. /Darlenexx
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April 4, 2025 at 10:52 AM
Hello John Read, Yes your soulmate and best friend. I will . you have a nice day to. xx /Darlene/
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April 4, 2025 at 10:46 AM
Hi Darlene that's true and best friend, have a lovely day dear friend. xx
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April 3, 2025 at 9:03 PM
Yep. As deep a feeling as deep feelings get. Good one, John.
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April 4, 2025 at 7:22 AM
Thank you Gershon hope life is treating you kind.
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April 3, 2025 at 1:18 PM
What a wonderful yet sad Monoku write. I am sorry about your loss. "Good Luck" We both did this one. Hope you are OK. Have a very blessed day writing away..............
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April 4, 2025 at 7:21 AM
Thank you Paula I'm still struggling along.
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April 3, 2025 at 12:51 PM
So true John, they say time is a great healer but I don't believe it is, the feeling of loss never leaves you. Tom
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April 3, 2025 at 12:58 PM
That's so true Tom memories never let you forget.
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April 3, 2025 at 12:43 PM
Hard to grasp this kind of grief. Indeed.
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April 3, 2025 at 12:45 PM
It can be soul destroying Andrea. xx
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April 3, 2025 at 11:11 AM
Such a truth we relive in their memories. Hope you are cooing my friend...
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April 3, 2025 at 12:30 PM
Thank God for memories Michael.
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April 3, 2025 at 11:02 AM
- Heartbreaking line from your heart, John - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs
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April 3, 2025 at 12:29 PM
Thank you Anne I'm used to receiving N/A's in the contests lol.xx
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April 3, 2025 at 10:47 AM
I completely understand this. I can also say it doesn't end too. I lost my best friend in 2000 and it seems like yesterday! I am sorry to hear about your loss. Take care. :)
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April 3, 2025 at 10:53 AM
Thank you Heidi for your visit and comment,as you say it never ends I can vouch for that, hope life is treating you kind God bless you. xx
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