What Makes Us Human

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They say: we are all aboard one boat do you agree? There are many sailboats in the choppy sea. Some ocean liners provide comfort and luxury. Others dispense leisure and a drink on the balcony. The star's radiance is not a concern. I realize we do not view them. Wilt yearns. Our murky self-portrait is enigmatic. It is the paradigm stalker and emphatic. We sat down after sliding into the ground. We also have a similar identity around. We have self-assurance and are proactive. Akin a careful skydiver, we remain tractive Our territory is growing with the breeze. With our feet dangling outside appease We are appreciative of the world broadly.  As I saw it rise, the dome seemed ungodly. Man's eyesight is cloaked in darkness. We face the side of the world in blackness. When we assess a man, we do view gloom. We all had to flee while jostling and doom.
Written: December 19, 2022 Written: December 19, 2022

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Date: 12/21/2022 3:07:00 AM
A profound analysis of human soul, dearest, Lasaad. I love it and I love ...your photo. Merry Christmas. Blessings
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Date: 12/20/2022 8:43:00 PM
We are all humans, but we sail in different boats and move in different directions. We forget that there is a commonness binding us. How we wish we could see life in brighter light and move as a single entity. Great poem with deep thoughts on life.
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Date: 12/20/2022 6:19:00 PM
A well written poem Sotto and it certainly makes one think about life on earth. We are all in this life together yet we all go about things in own way. It wouldn’t do to all be the same, variety us the spice of life so they say… All the best, Belle
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Date: 12/20/2022 6:00:00 AM
Dwelling in human emotions you seek the truth of who we are--not an easy task my friend. Your thoughts make me pause and think, Lasaad.
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Date: 12/20/2022 3:32:00 AM
- Las, thank you for this beautiful poem ... we are all in the same boat - but, everyone is different ... imagine if everyone could live in love and go in the same direction :) - I wish you a peaceful and lovely Christmas with your loved ones - Many good wishes for the new year - hugs
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