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Placed Tenth in:

What Makes me Smile Poetry Contest

Sponsored by Karen Jones.

What Makes Me Smile Smiles I seek from sweet shines of life To abate stress of my daily strife; Sweet shines of smiles brighten my path Melt away harshness of my wrath; Sweet smiles open doors of my heart To the songs of a lovely lark; I need not wander far away To search for sweet smiles of the day, I uncover sweet smiles close by As I stare at the starry sky, From cotton clouds cast as a deer Racing in heavens without fear, From eclipse of the silver moon Outstripped by shining stars so soon, From spring seeds shooting from the ground From graceful breeze blowing around, From flowers striving each other To catch my eyes without bother, From spring amethysts in full bloom Vying with roses in my room, From my cat chasing a grey rat, My dog wearing a lovely hat, From cherry blooms kissing my desk To wake me up from my short rest, From light rains splashing on my roof From my stroll holding me aloof, Myself holding pen upside down To set down my sign with a frown; Let me from sweet shines seek smiles, I know not where I`ll lie awhile.

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Date: 5/19/2025 10:18:00 PM
A smile is the outward expression of joy in our heart. So many beautiful things and scenes make us happy in life. You have enlisted so many things ranging from flowers to pets that make you happy.... things that usually leave most men happy. Congratulations Krish on your win.
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Krishnanand Guptar
Date: 5/20/2025 12:14:00 PM
Thank you Valsa for appreciating the above poem and for your kind wishes. Well I took the prompt with a smile as there are so many things that can make us smile. Wish you a pleasant day filled with smiles.
Date: 5/19/2025 2:09:00 PM
Krishnanand, you have written a great variety of colorful examples to convey the theme of the prompt. CONGRATS on your win! Janice
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Krishnanand Guptar
Date: 5/20/2025 12:10:00 PM
Thanks a lot friend for appreciating the above poem and for your kind wishes. My greetings to you and wishes for a pleasant day
Date: 5/18/2025 9:23:00 PM
Krishnanand congratulations on your win in my contest! I enjoyed your lighthearted reasons to smile! Your entry made me concentrate as your format was unique but the rhymes keep me engaged! Have a great week and thanks for your support!
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Krishnanand Guptar
Date: 5/20/2025 12:08:00 PM
Thanks a lot Karen for appreciating the above poem, its placement in the contest sponsored by you and your kind wishes. These means a lot to me. Wishing you a pleasant day.

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