What Makes Man Go

     What’s in man that makes him go

     Is it the satisfaction of the craftsman 
      Or the drive for more dough

       Ask the baker ~ He may just know
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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Crandall Avatar
September 14, 2025 at 6:23 PM
Haha, I stopped making one kind of dough, but the other kind of dough is what I live for now!
Etgen-Baker Avatar
September 14, 2025 at 4:51 PM
clever, witty, and thought provoking. The 'Bakers' I know probably don't know...probably from eating too much cookie dough :-)
Goldsmith Avatar
September 14, 2025 at 12:51 PM
What a fun/cute write you have here. Love It... Have a fun day writing away.........
Rodrigues Avatar
September 14, 2025 at 11:23 AM
The baker might know…he’s rolling in dough, and slipping on flour.
Swan Avatar
September 14, 2025 at 5:28 AM
This made me smile. Toast isn't the same as dough. J :)
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