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What Makes a Man

What Makes A Man Is it his virtures of lifes love, Or his moralistic meaning thereof. For each action of modesty, Love should be a feeling of honesty. Yet still he toils in life like a fool, Using his body as an evil tool. He motiveates centers around lust, Using kindness he turns love to dust. Is a relationship his compassions turn, Towards the habits he's learned. His love towards she, Never turns in a directionb of reality. But yes he claims to be a man, Then when love comes he refuses to stand. Still even though his physique portrays, Mnaly parts his behavioral love say's...

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Date: 10/28/2014 4:27:00 PM
What Makes A Man?? This poem nailed it!! Great write!
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