Lin Lane Poet Rhyme

What Lies Between Us

Daybreak arose when night had passed
Lush meadows mantled with drops of dew
Craving, I eagerly broke the morning fast
and eagerly reached my arms out for you

Our hunger sated, but we lingered abed
Once again, we were starving to death
What lies between us are silken threads
of love and whispers with sighing breath

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John Hamilton December 18, 2019 at 5:41 PM Very appealing thoughts Lin, reminds me of a song I wrote a while back, Between the whispers and the sighs...this is reminiscent of that...only I like yours better! Lin Lane December 18, 2019 at 5:45 PM I'm sure your lyrics far surpass my verses. Now, I'll have to read your poem. Thanks, John.

Ts Poetry December 18, 2019 at 3:25 PM The hunger never ceases with the one you truly love Lin Lane December 18, 2019 at 4:25 PM Hello, Tim. ah, yes, I do remember that.

Chris Green December 18, 2019 at 10:39 AM A beautiful way to start any day in my opinion. Your words are like a warm blanket on a cold day, gently caressing my eyes and thoughts. Beautifully done Lin. Lin Lane December 18, 2019 at 12:25 PM It seems we both had need of a blanket this morning. With gratitude for your thoughts...I thank you, Chris.