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What It's About - Double Haiku

WHAT IT’S ABOUT – double Haiku

our four cute kittens
a tiger, two blacks, a gray
must be bigamy

well, four mixed kittens?
their daddy is a stray, or
daddies should I say

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M. L. Kiser

Date: 9/11/2014 11:27:00 PM

I had an old tomcat once, he got into a lot of trouble before he was fixed. He lived 22 years, ran off and died somewhere. I adored him. You have brought him to mind with your double haiku.

Matthew Anish

Date: 9/2/2014 6:16:00 PM

I remember my cat = named Bilbo. She had a # of kittens. She was not a nice cat but I really miss her. You used the American haiku form - which is all to the good. Peace and Love Matthew Anish

M. L. Kiser

Date: 9/1/2014 11:44:00 AM

Ah, but the kitty's are beautiful.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/31/2014 3:20:00 PM

hi, DAver, glad to see this cute poem getting more hits since i was here last. I hope you are feeling ok today. It's nice and sunshiny here. AT last!

Pandita Sietesantos

Date: 8/30/2014 9:51:00 AM

Hehehehe - these had me giggling! Very witty! Pandita

Donna Jones

Date: 8/28/2014 7:35:00 PM

Thanks..:-) :-) enjoyed this smile this evening...

Elaine George

Date: 8/27/2014 1:33:00 AM

lol!!! Only you could write a comical haiku, Dave. Lainie

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 8/25/2014 7:54:00 PM

Dear Daver, You had me laughing out loud! Definitely bigamy (may polygamy) and "daddies" for sure. How about sending me a football footle for a project on Karen's site? Love you and was wondering why I hadn't heard from you lately. Hope your eyes are improving. Love, Carolyn

Jack Horne

Date: 8/24/2014 11:42:00 AM

LOL, had a chuckle here, Daver : )