What It Should Be
What It Should Be
After I had awakened and then became dressed
Read your poem and how much I was impressed
Was so full of much spirit with vigor and vive
Made my mind and being become totally alive.
Might find a few misspellings' here and there
Never really did matter and less could care
You were venturesome in central theme
With power and authority reigning supreme.
Ideas formed, came together and did collect
Things once loose now easily would connect
Another thing about your poem I want to say
Is that it should soon be Poem of the Day.
James Serious Mysterious Horn
Retired Veteran and Poet
Copyright © James Horn | Year Posted 2016
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