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What Is Wrong With Me

What’s wrong with me? I’m not normal, you see It’s an effort to get out of bed People love to talk about what comes easy What’s wrong with me? I’m not normal you see I’m sick of this topic of you and me and normalcy Too many thoughts attacking my head What’s wrong with me? I’m not normal, you see It’s an effort to get out of bed

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Date: 2/7/2020 8:19:00 PM
Sounds a lot like depression. When I am depressed I do not want to get out of bed, nor shower, nor eat I just want to be left alone.
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Date: 2/19/2019 9:59:00 AM
I love your Triolet and the topic! I love writing this form, and I find it quite addictive. Thank goodness for abnormalacy! Awesomeness, Sherilynn
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Date: 2/18/2019 11:14:00 AM
Hey, I understand. I have been sleeping the day away far too frequently. Painful things happen in life. Our bodies get depressed, our souls feel oppressed. It is hard. Just count every time you DO get up as a Victory! (That's what I have to do, in order not to lose all hope!) Hang in there! Peace and Blessings!
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Date: 2/15/2019 3:46:00 PM
Did I say hugs, I meant HUGS <3
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Date: 2/15/2019 3:29:00 PM
Sometimes that depends upon who is in bed with you! Aloha! Rico
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Date: 2/15/2019 2:48:00 PM
Oh I feel this one. Potent. An aside, I think you're normal, not average ;) hugs
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