What is this

I cannot deny
The feelings I hide
My emotions provide 
an endless supply
If she were to ask 
I could not lie
About this thing
I have inside
That feels like pride
That make me fly
The look of her hair
Her made up eye’s
Her voice so precious
Her silence my delight
Her presence 
My existence
The fear of her I fight
The burden I bare 
Because of sight
Beauty a substance 
Equil to might
What makes wanting
Turn into fright
And dreams become
The hopes of what might
These irresistible things
About a girl iI like

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Date: 1/18/2024 10:17:00 AM
You never know when or how you fall in love with another person. She sounds very special to you. Nicely written. love phyl
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Date: 1/15/2024 1:40:00 AM
There are times when infatuation takes the upper hand.
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Date: 1/15/2024 1:09:00 AM
I’m excited you like someone enough to write about her! Looking forward to more poetry from you. Love how you put this together and the melodic rhyme. Keep them coming. I have been learning to play piano again and don’t write as often. But I digress. Love this and want to see more from you! Hugs
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Date: 1/15/2024 12:41:00 AM
TS, wonderful poem, I could really feel the emotion and love for this girl you like, well done, blessings, Constance
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Date: 1/14/2024 5:54:00 PM
Very well written and lovely expressions of desire, and want :)
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Date: 1/14/2024 4:35:00 PM
Ahh!! Great that you like this girl so much that you would write about her. I bet she has you thinking about her all the time. Thanks for sharing this one with us and for dropping by my page. Sara K
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Date: 1/14/2024 3:04:00 PM
This is a likable poem of love of the moment. But isn't the chase much of the fun? Thumbs up for this statement of desire.
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