What Is His Name

The party’s going well, the drinks are flowing fast,
When someone saunters over from my long and distant past.
‘Hello’ I say sheepishly, for his name I do not know,
Is it Frank or maybe Steve? I hope it doesn’t show. 

‘Where are you working these days?’ a fishing exercise, 
But I still don’t know his name, something I’m struggling to disguise.
‘I’m sorry’ he says ‘but I cannot place your name’
‘Me neither’ I reply ‘ but it’s Ronnie all the same’.

11th November 2019
Give me 8 lines of poetry contest
Sponsor - Tania Kitchin
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Date: 11/13/2019 6:21:00 AM
Enjoyed your poem, Ronald. I can so relate. LOL Congrats on your win.
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Ronald D Thompson
Date: 11/13/2019 9:24:00 AM
Thank you so much. Best wishes...Ron x
Date: 11/13/2019 6:17:00 AM
‘Party’s’ — wasn’t it one party? This poem’s for everyone.
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Date: 11/13/2019 9:26:00 AM
Stand corrected. Appreciated...Ron :)
Date: 11/13/2019 5:01:00 AM
Ron, congratulations on your winning placement in the contest, I love this and it makes me smile every time I read it, it is clever and fun and so true to life!
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Date: 11/13/2019 9:27:00 AM
Thank you Tania. Glad you enjoyed. Best wishes...Ron
Date: 11/12/2019 6:52:00 PM
Hello Ronald … you got out of that beautifully Ronald. Must remember this … thanks Ronald - Lindsay
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Date: 11/12/2019 2:30:00 PM
A FAVE for me, Ronnie! What a world of sociological commentary could be replaced by your remarkable poem, which probably resonates with anyone who's ever met up with their past!! Bravo! Cheers, gw
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Ronald D Thompson
Date: 11/12/2019 2:33:00 PM
Cheers Gershon. I am sure most people will have encountered this awkward situation. Appreciate the endorsement my friend. Best...Ron :)
Date: 11/12/2019 1:51:00 PM
Don't you just hate when that happens? In my line of work many have worked for me throughout the years and every once in a while an old employee will see me and I am left in the same predicament. Really well done Ron. I love the humor I find on your page.
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Date: 11/12/2019 1:54:00 PM
Thanks Chris. Yeah happens to me from time to time. I think it's an age thing as well. It's like trying to remember an actors name and then you find you cannot remember the film he is in either! Hope all is well my friend..Ron :)
Date: 11/11/2019 5:56:00 PM
Hi Ronnie Great poem. Its got that you cant look away until your done reading it. Thanks for sharing
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Date: 11/12/2019 6:58:00 AM
Thanks. Glad you enjoyed and appreciate you taking the time to post a comment. Best wishes..Ron :)
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