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Lighthouse Poetry Contest. Sponsored by: Sara Kendrick 

What If The Old Lighthouse Could Speak, What Would It Say?

This old lighthouse wants to say, about the cold clouds of gray. When it rained all night and day, with the keeper wanting to pray. Then the sun would come out to play, making the blue sea a pretty highway. This old lighthouse saw many ships, some sailed by and some smashed like a souffle. Sailing by were many birds of prey, telling the old lighthouse it was like a cast away. Old lighthouse even on Christmas day, I can not getaway. For the old lighthouse and keeper was it judgment day?  Why did the keeper want to stay? Why not just run away? The keeper knew he could not leave ~ no way, telling God they both were not a runway.
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Croft Avatar
July 6, 2026 at 12:07 AM
congrats on your placement, nice rhyming!
George Avatar
July 5, 2026 at 8:40 PM
Congratulations dear Paula on your winning poem with great rhymes.
Andresen Avatar
July 5, 2026 at 12:53 PM
- Congratulations on your winning poem, Paula :) - hugs
Williams Avatar
July 5, 2026 at 11:58 AM
Congratulations on your top-12 finish with this illuminating [OK, I just had to work that in! ;) ] poem, Paula!! I am so glad it was written by a Human Poet!! Blessings & very best, Bartholomew
Goldsmith Avatar
July 5, 2026 at 10:35 AM
"11 Place" ~ "What If The Old Lighthouse Could Speak, What Would It Say?" Written:6/30/2026 ~ Written by Human Poet..............
Jones Avatar
July 5, 2026 at 11:58 AM
Congratulations on your win with this delightful rhyming poem!
Andresen Avatar
July 1, 2026 at 12:49 AM
- Unfortunately there are fewer and fewer lighthouses today ... modern technology has taken over the lighthouse keeper's work ... a great poem, Paula :) - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs
Goldsmith Avatar
July 3, 2026 at 1:46 PM
Thanks for reading/writing. Also Thanks for your, Best wishes in the contest. I love to see pretty lighthouses. Yes, many are gone. So Sad... Glad you found my Lighthouse rhyme to be, a great poem. It was fun to write. Hugs... Have a great/blessed day writing away.............
Goldsmith Avatar
June 30, 2026 at 2:58 PM
"What If The Old Lighthouse Could Speak, What Would It Say?" Written:6/30/2026 ~ Written by Human Poet..............
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