What If God Blinked

The sky turned into vast dark emptiness
The smell of nature replaced with odourless aridness
The winds got sucked into the ground
Quiescence was the loudest sound
Rivers so still without ripples
A tide and flow trapped in its own course
Sea waves and sand in a truce
Time stopped, mystery was let loose
Carnivores lost their bloodthirstiness
The birds became flightless
The flyers wondered nervously in the crawlers’ habitats
The food chain missed its end and lost its start
Shadows left the surfaces 
And merged with their objects
There was no sound of nature’s forces
As the earth became oblivious of itself 
A spell of timelessness was imminent
In the middle of nothingness, we are barely existent
Nature almost extinct
All because God Blinked

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Date: 11/3/2019 7:20:00 AM
Wow - lots of meaningful imagery, Michelo. Congrats on your well deserved win.
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Date: 12/29/2018 8:51:00 AM
I like this! You pose THE existential question, in my opinion, and your poem becomes quite profound in its final lines. Congrats on your win, Michelo.
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Michelo Mweetwa
Date: 12/29/2018 10:12:00 AM
Thank you
Date: 12/28/2018 4:21:00 PM
Michelo, we like to think God is always watching over us, so it's very interesting the way you describe all the things in nature that would go awry if He "blinked." Nice work. Congratulations on your placement in Brian's contest! Best wishes, Carolyn
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Date: 12/29/2018 4:56:00 AM
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