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What If

What if, When you die, there is no Heaven, And no hell, You are just stuck here, Wandering this earth forever. But then you wonder, Is this a dream? Have I finally gotten to the point where I can't see my dreams? Or is this a nightmare? Where I have no one and all that is left there for me is Nothing. That all I can see is Nothing... And I'm forced to live my life alone forever To be alone without you, I wish I were dead, Then to be without you You make my heart beat My soul to have light You keep the dark from... Consuming me, The darkness that threatens to take me That would surely kill me... Then where would I be? If there was no Heaven or hell Where would I go? Would I just walk? An empty place... In between life and death? What if I never left that place? What if I never got to see you again? What if....

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Date: 5/17/2016 12:24:00 AM
Felicia Driessen, creative and well done. Thank you for sharing. **SKAT**
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Date: 5/14/2016 3:32:00 PM
Felicia Driessen, Fantastic writing, glad to read your poem. ~Love LINDA~
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Date: 3/9/2016 11:26:00 AM
A deeply introspective piece. Masterfully penned~7++
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Date: 3/8/2016 12:11:00 PM
Interesting piece Felicia, like your line of thought and the way you take this. Although I would truly believe in a heaven and hell, it's good to ask the awkward questions of life to see where our thoughts take us. You give it nice flow and real meaning, well done!
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