What If

why cant i judge you, what if im right maybe im perfect, what are you like? okay, im not perfect but what if im close i love my regrets, its the life i chose who should we love, who can you trust im only human, whats wrong with lust? love-hate relations with rain and wind i like going back to places ive never been..

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Solo Iq

Date: 9/20/2011 12:56:00 PM

''i'm only human, whats wrong with lust?''....................good point

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 9/20/2011 9:56:00 AM

A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you this morning Prentiss. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. Read and comment on their's and they will return in kind. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love and blessing always, Carol