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What I Think

Honey it's probaly not best befor I have a drink. To look deep in my eyes and ask what I think. Cause Im far from a romantic and your far from a thinker. Short skirt nice legs. Your a go go dancer and I just another drinker. After a few glasses I'll savor that last drop. I'll lose my mind. And hopefully you'll lose your top. have a private party for only two. well shed more than ambition. As i drink outta your shoe. I'll empty your liquor cabbinet and you'll keep my wallet shrinkin. My dear it dont take a rocket scientist to figure out what Im thinkin.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Date: 5/17/2009 4:30:00 PM
Nice write john!
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Date: 5/15/2009 9:47:00 AM
Nice job.
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Date: 5/10/2009 6:16:00 PM
ooo sweet poem...i can see the imagery -Alley
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Date: 5/10/2009 1:23:00 PM
Every stanza made me chuckle out loud. Brilliant! Kat x
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Date: 5/8/2009 1:51:00 PM
Nice write John, James
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Date: 5/7/2009 8:07:00 PM
That's it, Let's get to it! No sense in dragging it out huh JOhn, loved this, had a great flow to it.
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Date: 5/7/2009 5:59:00 PM
Outrageously funny, John! Indeed, you leave no room for doubt about what you're "thinkin." Laughed out loud through the whole poem. Thank you for giving us this delightful, witty verse! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 5/7/2009 1:57:00 PM
ow yeah my friend i know what you re thinkin,i do and i better not comment more;-),this made me smile,take care of your wallet and your pants---wonderful write-wonderful---charma;-)
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