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~ tribute to my mother, my role model in so many ways during my most impressionable years ~

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What I Remember Most

I remember how mom treasured every moment
she somehow stretched time
never seeming to be rushed or flustered
always keeping busy with something in the works

a mind that never ceased
the wheels turning and churning
her life a tribute to the joy
that could be found in every instant                       

I remember vividly the scent of freedom
that first morning after highschool was out
and summer vacation began

it was then I had a peek at mom’s morning routine
after the young ones left on the school bus
there I was I’d watch somewhat of
an intruder on mom’s personal time

she would open all doors and windows 
to let the country air into the house
it was magnificent and intoxicating
~ that smell of sudden freedom


AP: 1st place 2026, 1st place 2025, Honorable Mention 2020

Submitted on July 6, 2019 for contest CHILDHOOD MEMORIES sponsored by CHANTELLE ANNE COOKE  -  RANKED 3RD
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Darnell Sr Avatar
August 21, 2021 at 2:29 PM
Hi, Line! You are such a beautiful person to tribute your mother this way for her morning routine. Thank you for sharing this simple but yet inspiring write. Glad I visited now! Best of Wishes, William
Gauthier Avatar
August 21, 2021 at 3:15 PM
Thank, William ~ much appreciated ~
Watt Avatar
April 12, 2020 at 10:42 PM
"her life a tribute to the joy that could be found in every instant". This says so much about living in the here and now. Fabulous that you got to observe that in her and make it a lasting memory. Well I remember that first kiss of freedom after high school ended. Thanks for the reminder, Line.
Gauthier Avatar
April 13, 2020 at 7:38 AM
Thank you so much for your lovely comment, John. Most appreciated.
Mcguire Avatar
July 15, 2019 at 7:50 PM
Great Poem Congrats
Gauthier Avatar
July 15, 2019 at 8:47 PM
Thanks for your much appreciated visit and comment, Timothy.
Blodgett Avatar
July 13, 2019 at 10:31 PM
I feel like a teen again......
Gauthier Avatar
July 14, 2019 at 3:13 AM
Thanks for your much appreciated visit and comment, Lonna.
Mcgee Avatar
July 13, 2019 at 3:45 PM
Oh, LIne, I just love the simplicity of this peek into your mom's life and therefore, yours. Coingrats on your win
Gauthier Avatar
July 13, 2019 at 5:25 PM
Thank you so much, Jeanne. I so appreciate your lovely visit and comment.
Fairchild Avatar
July 12, 2019 at 8:00 AM
Congratulations! A thousand beautiful thoughts coalesced into such a lovely memory! Wonderful!
Gauthier Avatar
July 12, 2019 at 2:27 PM
Thanks for your most appreciated visit and compliment, Andrew.
Ravidas Avatar
July 10, 2019 at 6:14 PM
Childhood memories, sudden freedom, perfect bronze) I'm glad Chantelle got a good look at charm of this poem. Congrats, Line.
Gauthier Avatar
July 10, 2019 at 8:24 PM
Thanks for your lovely comment, Kurt. Much appreciated.
Krutsinger Avatar
July 7, 2019 at 10:55 PM
Your imagery made this story unfold as if I was there. Good luck in the contest, Line.
Gauthier Avatar
July 7, 2019 at 11:26 PM
Thanks for your lovely compliment, Caren.
Romios Avatar
July 7, 2019 at 5:22 PM
Line, a terrific write! I feel I am with you And your Mom....))) Panagiota Xx
Gauthier Avatar
July 7, 2019 at 9:47 PM
What a lovely compliment. Thanks, Panagiota.
Wolf Avatar
July 7, 2019 at 1:23 PM
Gosh, is this precious, and what a tribute to your Mom! Love it. :) gw
Wolf Avatar
July 11, 2019 at 4:17 PM
Back with kudos on your trophy win in Chantelle's contest with this memorable tribute to your Mother. Richly deserved! ~ gw
Gauthier Avatar
July 7, 2019 at 4:31 PM
Thank you so much, Gershon. What a lovely compliment.
Michael Avatar
July 6, 2019 at 1:56 PM
What a wonderful memory...
Gauthier Avatar
July 6, 2019 at 2:03 PM
Thank you, Arturo, for your lovely visit and comment.
Cunningham Avatar
July 6, 2019 at 1:09 PM
Beautiful memories line. Good luck. Tom
Gauthier Avatar
July 6, 2019 at 1:13 PM
Thanks for your lovely visit and comment, Tom.
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