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~ tribute to my mother, my role model in so many ways during my most impressionable years ~

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I remember how mom treasured every moment she somehow stretched time never seeming to be rushed or flustered always keeping busy with something in the works a mind that never ceased the wheels turning and churning her life a tribute to the joy that could be found in every instant I remember vividly the scent of freedom that first morning after highschool was out and summer vacation began it was then I had a peek at mom’s morning routine after the young ones left on the school bus there I was I’d watch somewhat of an intruder on mom’s personal time she would open all doors and windows to let the country air into the house it was magnificent and intoxicating ~ that smell of sudden freedom AP: Honorable Mention 2020 Submitted on July 6, 2019 for contest CHILDHOOD MEMORIES sponsored by CHANTELLE ANNE COOKE - RANKED 3RD

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Date: 8/21/2021 2:29:00 PM
Hi, Line! You are such a beautiful person to tribute your mother this way for her morning routine. Thank you for sharing this simple but yet inspiring write. Glad I visited now! Best of Wishes, William
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Line Gauthier
Date: 8/21/2021 3:15:00 PM
Thank, William ~ much appreciated ~
Date: 4/12/2020 10:42:00 PM
"her life a tribute to the joy that could be found in every instant". This says so much about living in the here and now. Fabulous that you got to observe that in her and make it a lasting memory. Well I remember that first kiss of freedom after high school ended. Thanks for the reminder, Line.
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Line Gauthier
Date: 4/13/2020 7:38:00 AM
Thank you so much for your lovely comment, John. Most appreciated.
Date: 7/15/2019 7:50:00 PM
Great Poem Congrats
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Line Gauthier
Date: 7/15/2019 8:47:00 PM
Thanks for your much appreciated visit and comment, Timothy.
Date: 7/13/2019 10:31:00 PM
I feel like a teen again......
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Line Gauthier
Date: 7/14/2019 3:13:00 AM
Thanks for your much appreciated visit and comment, Lonna.
Date: 7/13/2019 3:45:00 PM
Oh, LIne, I just love the simplicity of this peek into your mom's life and therefore, yours. Coingrats on your win
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Line Gauthier
Date: 7/13/2019 5:25:00 PM
Thank you so much, Jeanne. I so appreciate your lovely visit and comment.
Date: 7/12/2019 8:00:00 AM
Congratulations! A thousand beautiful thoughts coalesced into such a lovely memory! Wonderful!
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Line Gauthier
Date: 7/12/2019 2:27:00 PM
Thanks for your most appreciated visit and compliment, Andrew.
Date: 7/10/2019 6:14:00 PM
Childhood memories, sudden freedom, perfect bronze) I'm glad Chantelle got a good look at charm of this poem. Congrats, Line.
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Line Gauthier
Date: 7/10/2019 8:24:00 PM
Thanks for your lovely comment, Kurt. Much appreciated.
Date: 7/7/2019 10:55:00 PM
Your imagery made this story unfold as if I was there. Good luck in the contest, Line.
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Date: 7/7/2019 11:26:00 PM
Thanks for your lovely compliment, Caren.
Date: 7/7/2019 5:22:00 PM
Line, a terrific write! I feel I am with you And your Mom....))) Panagiota Xx
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Line Gauthier
Date: 7/7/2019 9:47:00 PM
What a lovely compliment. Thanks, Panagiota.
Date: 7/7/2019 1:23:00 PM
Gosh, is this precious, and what a tribute to your Mom! Love it. :) gw
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 7/11/2019 4:17:00 PM
Back with kudos on your trophy win in Chantelle's contest with this memorable tribute to your Mother. Richly deserved! ~ gw
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Line Gauthier
Date: 7/7/2019 4:31:00 PM
Thank you so much, Gershon. What a lovely compliment.
Date: 7/6/2019 1:56:00 PM
What a wonderful memory...
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Line Gauthier
Date: 7/6/2019 2:03:00 PM
Thank you, Arturo, for your lovely visit and comment.
Date: 7/6/2019 1:09:00 PM
Beautiful memories line. Good luck. Tom
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Line Gauthier
Date: 7/6/2019 1:13:00 PM
Thanks for your lovely visit and comment, Tom.

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