Ann Gilmour Poet Free verse

What I Really Like

Mountain peaks
clouds passing by
gazing at the moon
planets high up in the sky
so full of awe
I yearn for more

Sea more powerful 
than we know
mesmerized by
ebb and flow
beneath the surface
a whole new world
that we may never know

Our universe so awesome
mother earth our planet home
though I am not entirely sure
that we are here alone…

Written: 2nd March 2019

Contest: What I Really Like
Sponsor: Maureen McGreavy

Contest: CONTEST 570
Sponsor: Brian Strand
1st place

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Line Gauthier March 12, 2019 at 7:28 PM Congrats on your win, Ann. Well done.

Eve Roper March 7, 2019 at 5:23 PM Congratulations on your win, Ann. Hugs Eve ~`* Ann Gilmour March 9, 2019 at 11:11 AM Thank you so much Eve, for your congrats and hugs. Sending you kindest thoughts and hugs Ann xx

Brandy Nicole March 6, 2019 at 3:47 PM The beauty of it all. You have expressed this in such a wonderful way. Many vivid images indeed. I like exploring these moments as well. Congratulations Ann, on this win. :) Brandy Ann Gilmour March 9, 2019 at 11:09 AM Wow, thank you so much Brandy for your wonderful comments and congrats. Nice to meet you, with kindest thoughts Ann xx

David Drowley March 6, 2019 at 11:43 AM 'Ann, Congratulations on your win! You have captured the wonder of our existence so well. David :)' Ann Gilmour March 9, 2019 at 11:06 AM Many thanks David for your lovely comment and your congrats. I appreciate your visit. Kindest thoughts Ann xx

Sara Kendrick March 6, 2019 at 10:32 AM Congrats. SK Ann Gilmour March 9, 2019 at 11:04 AM Thank you so much Sara for your congrats, thanks for your visit, kindest thoughts Ann xx

James Marshall Goff March 3, 2019 at 1:54 AM You paint a grand picture, Ann! no, we are not alone, I know a seer who describes parallel dimensions all around us, more like a dreamscape or 'shroom-trip (no, I have not tried!) which scientists are now confirming may be an alternate existence...jimbo Ann Gilmour March 3, 2019 at 1:58 AM Oh wow, how exciting that sounds James! Many thanks for your comments, though not sure what a 'shroom trip' is, haha?? kindest thoughts Ann xx

Arturo Michael March 2, 2019 at 11:35 AM Really good write...makes an enjoyable read Ann Gilmour March 2, 2019 at 11:54 AM Thank you Arturo for your lovely comments and I am so glad you enjoyed it. Kindest thoughts Ann xx