What I Have Become

i set and wounder what i have become feel emtey inside not at
all myself slowly loosing it can't beleave this is me trying to hold 
on to the oz of hope i have left 
drowning my soul in tears of sorrow feeling as i'm fallin deeper
into a hole no ladder no rope to get me out can't beleave this is me
my day to day pain is getting stronger to hard to deal with not wanting
to feel or see another day of this so call life gettin to that bracking point
where i dont know who i am or what to do so far gone my mind is blowin
can't beleave this is me
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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April 5, 2011 at 11:06 AM
Thank you for sharing your excellent poetry Danny. I enjoyed reading it and hope to read more of it soon. May you always find the inspiration to continue with your writing endeavors. Love, Carol "
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