What I Gave You Did Not Recieve

I gave my cup so that you may drink Substance that you may eat Shelter for your comfort And all that have I say partake But on a day forward as you now labor I ask less then a tenth In contribute for this household But, in offense, instead you turned away Never again to speak to me this day With love for another I still wonder And in hope you have made good your way Then, in a time you have more to offer Another in dire need of stay A learning journey to humbleness, sacrifice unto a happiness in grace
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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May 1, 2012 at 8:04 PM
Taking and never giving...the many attributes of the world....well written Michael :)
Smith Avatar
May 1, 2012 at 7:46 PM
You're so compassionate and giving .. considerate and thoughtful ... I think anyone who does not appreciate the things you give is a fool .... take care of yourself.. Dana'lynn
Minardi Avatar
April 30, 2012 at 9:42 AM
A powerful, poem. Is it religious or romance? A very cool one, Michael. Enjoyed your words :)
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April 29, 2012 at 10:08 PM
A long journey for most, truly to be humble before God requires that one finds themselves through him. I think upon introspection, too many are afraid of what they see. If instead, they asked him in and gave him everything they would find this journey shortened and whats inside not so frightening. Great poetry sir, I enjoyed reading this, thank you.
Burch Avatar
April 29, 2012 at 9:49 PM
Such a tender heart you have Michael...wonderful write! I love the depth in this piece...well done...big hugs,love ~deb
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April 29, 2012 at 8:55 PM
No matter what keep being who you are...can't teach people to be grateful or appreciative!!! Good piece!! INK-U-SCRIPT
Mohammed Avatar
April 29, 2012 at 6:55 PM
Hm... Ironical, interesting and too often true Michael...Thanks for sharing...Love Diana
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