What I Gave Up for You

(Spanish poet Rafael Alberti was not happy 
when his daughter became a Catholic nun:
here is his poem [translated] on the theme)

For you, I left my woodlands, secret groves,
my sleepless dogs, my exiled cityscapes.
For you, passed over all life’s sweetest grapes,
abandoned steepling cliffs and cool, dark coves.

I left behind a shiver, for your sake.  And I left
the savage splendour of wild, untameable fire,
and left behind my shadow on the pyre,
and the hollow, bleeding eyes of the bereft.

I walked away from doves, sad by the water,
abandoned horses stamping on hot sand,
the welcome stinging breeze from off the brine.

For you, I gave up all was ever mine.
So give me, Rome, something at least as grand
as what I lost when I became your daughter.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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Diderot Avatar
December 12, 2025 at 1:47 AM
Absolutely stunning poem....this, "I walked away from doves, sad by the water, abandoned horses stamping on hot sand, the welcome stinging breeze from off the brine"... will be reading all the rest of your portfolio over Christmas.
Coy Avatar
December 12, 2025 at 1:54 AM
Candide, I am delighted. Thank you very much. And it's good to meet another Child of the Enlightenment. Warm regards, Michael
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