What I Gave

What I Gave?

I gave….nothing??
Time, and patience, and
a love of “The Game’.

She gave everything,
heart, strength, resolve,
to play “The Game”.

She is special,
handicapped, disabled,
and six years old.

Me, not so special,
did not wish to see,
her handicaps, keep her
from “The Game”.

She stood, bat in hand,
seemingly unable
to hit the ball.

I stood, confused,
befuddled when she said:
“you have to sing the song.”

“What song” I asked.
“The Baseball Song” she answered.

I looked around
seeking help when
her mother shouted
“Take Me Out to The Ball Game.”

I sang!  She Hit!
The love of “The Game”
etched itself upon another heart.

“The Game” will always be grateful
to her, for her, for 
What She Gave.

John G. Lawless
6/30/2014

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014



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Date: 7/15/2014 1:49:00 AM
beautiful :) Congrats on the win John
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John Lawless
Date: 7/15/2014 7:00:00 AM
Thank you, Sasha.
Date: 7/14/2014 1:06:00 PM
This is so good, John...perspective means a lot. Congratulations, my friend.
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John Lawless
Date: 7/15/2014 6:59:00 AM
Faye, children have a way of changing our perspective, on us, on them, on life. Thanks reading and commenting
Date: 7/14/2014 8:30:00 AM
Lovely write and unique take on this theme, John. Enjoyed. congrats on your deserved win. // paul
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John Lawless
Date: 7/15/2014 6:57:00 AM
Paul, the unique take on this theme is based in fact. She did request the song and I did sing. Thank you for your comment and support.
Date: 7/14/2014 12:35:00 AM
John this is splendid! Power of words amazing,, congrats on top win!
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John Lawless
Date: 7/15/2014 6:55:00 AM
Thank you Dr. Sharma for you continued support.
Date: 7/13/2014 8:44:00 PM
Beautiful John. Congratulations on your 1st place win... Hugs Verlena
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Date: 7/13/2014 8:51:00 PM
Thank you, Verlena, for your kind words.
Date: 7/13/2014 6:56:00 PM
John, This is a lovely return gift for the memory of the young lady and her delight in baseball. Congratulations on your win. I appreciated all the excellent entries to this contest, thanks for entering.
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Date: 7/13/2014 8:50:00 PM
Thank you Sheri for all the work you put in on the contest. They are a wonderful inspiration for the muse.
Date: 7/1/2014 2:58:00 AM
beautiful, we live for the smiles and innocence our children give to us. Mohan
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Date: 7/13/2014 8:49:00 PM
Thanks for the support Mohan, always appreciated.
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