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What I Feel No Words Could Bear

What would be of me if you could be with me How would be my present days if ever you were spared other few days I open wide my heart so as you I can see and stand in awe of the woman I would see! I will not weep or tend to lament just swallow every moan and each lament I knelt to the grace of God’s Hands for the blessing to kiss my mother’s hands I prayed for a time to once again see you graced with your presence and a kiss from you The woman I see as I close my eyes that’s you, mum, the apple of my eyes I do remember now my promise and vow in my words I’d honour your Beauty I avow Precious praiseworthy parent, my very pride a sweet scented Rose, a lofty tree in your pride Envy could not sow its seeds into my heart as your passionate Love would immune my heart Here I am on a special day that honours every dear mum what I feel no words could bear as you are not here, mum.. Besma Written on March 3rd, 2021 Edited on May 29th, 2021 Mother’s Day on May 30th, 2021 (In Tunisia, celebrated on the last Sunday of May) Happy Mother’s Day to all the amazing mums in the whole world!

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Date: 11/9/2021 10:47:00 PM
Loved this beautifully rhyming poem on your dear mum. I can gauge the depth of felial love expressed here by you as a loving daughter. A caring, loving Mother is an immaculate presence at home. When she is gone, her memories will instil and guide her children. This dedication to all mothers is a wonderful tribute to motherhood
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Besma Riabi Dziri
Date: 11/14/2021 9:21:00 AM
Of inestimable value are mothers! Their presence is the epitome of guidance, security and Love.. their absence is an aching crack in our lives whatever is our age.. Your words are soothingly beautiful, dear Valsa.. thank you so much for your graceful presence! My deepest regards and blessings.
Date: 8/15/2021 10:21:00 AM
what a heartfelt tribute, so sorry i missed your POTD belated congratulations:-) hugs Jan xxdux
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Date: 8/15/2021 3:23:00 PM
My great pleasure seeing here and receiving your warm congratulations, dear JAN.. You truly honour me and my humble poetry any time you walk my path.. Thank you so much! My deepest regards and blessings. Love and hugs.
Date: 6/15/2021 10:58:00 AM
Such a deep and heartfelt tribute to your mother Besma! Lovely writing!
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Date: 6/17/2021 10:27:00 AM
A sweet bliss and great pleasure shared! Thank you so much, Smita, for honouring my humble tribute to a so precious mother! My deepest regards and blessings.
Date: 6/9/2021 12:53:00 PM
What a wonderful tribute to your mother. Congratulations on your potd.
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Date: 6/10/2021 12:25:00 AM
So kind of you dear Rama to spread your poetic feel and honour my humble words with your genuine congratulations.. thank you so much. My deepest regards and blessings.
Date: 6/6/2021 10:01:00 AM
HI BESMA, MY DEAR FRIEND, WE SEEM TO HAVE LOST CONTACT FOR A WHILE BUT A TRUE FRIENDSHIP CAN NEVER BE SEVERED. CONGRATULATIONS POETRY SIS ON YOUR INCREDIBLE POEM OF THE DAY WHICH YOU WROTE FOR YOUR MOM, AND THEN TO EVERY OTHER MOM IN THE WORLD. AN ABSOLUTE FAV FOR ME. HOPE YOU ARE KEEPING WELL AND HAVE HAD YOUR VACCINE. ELIAS AND I HAD OURS A WEEK AGO. KEEP SAFE ALWAYS, HUGS,LOVE AND BLESSINGS JENNIFER.
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Date: 6/6/2021 2:15:00 PM
Those who are on the same path never lose connection soul sister.. you are in my heart sweet friend despite the distance that sets us apart.. you are always ahead of me spilling your kind words and genuine compliments.. of remarkable humility and generosity dearest Jenny! Looking forward to reading your wonderful poetry! God bless you along with your family and hope you are doing great! I had my first covid-19 vaccine last week and am waiting for the second dose.. hope all Humanity will be safe.. thank you so much for honouring my humble words.. My warmest wishes. Love and hugs.
Date: 6/4/2021 4:15:00 AM
I am not surprised this made POTD my friend. Your pen is powerful but your heart even more. Your mom , " the diamond of your soul " must be smiling from above. Bursting at the seams with pride for her daughter. Keep doing what you are doing dear heart, splaying that sunshine all over the place every day, Much love to you, always, and forever, Vie.
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Date: 6/6/2021 3:14:00 AM
My respect and my Love to you sweet friend Mystic Rose.. how I relish in your tender feelings! How beautiful are your profound thoughts! Blessed I am to have you in my world helping my soul ascend to higher levels of inner Beauty! Thank you so much! My warmest wishes and deepest regards and blessings. Love and hugs.
Date: 6/3/2021 2:21:00 PM
Besma, back again with congratulations on poem of the week. God bless you. <3
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Date: 6/6/2021 3:10:00 AM
Above words my deepest feelings of delight and gratefulness to you dearest Eve for your genuine Beauty! Thank you so much for the honour of your so warm and wonderful presence! My warmest wishes. Deepest regards and blessings. Love and hugs.
Date: 6/3/2021 7:52:00 AM
Congratulations, Dear Besma on POTW - that's brilliant. Your golden pen deserves this honour. A beautiful tribute to your mother, and to all mothers on a special day. Love and best wishes ~ Mala
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Date: 6/6/2021 3:03:00 AM
The honour is mine dear Mala to have you here with your wonderful feedback and highly appreciated compliment! Thank you so much! My great pleasure! My warmest wishes. Love and hugs.
Date: 6/2/2021 8:28:00 PM
My dearest Besma, it has been too long since I have immersed my self in the wonders and beauties of your golden heart and soul. As soon as I read your title and first couplet I knew this poem was to honor your beloved and dearly missed mum. I especially loved; "Precious praiseworthy parent, my very pride" such admiration and love spills forth from your exquisite pen. I feel your every word as they reflect my own heart for my departed mom. A prayerful, reverent and loving piece. Congratulations for the dual honors of POTD and POTW. Honors richly deserved, dear poetess. Warmest wishes, love and hugs to you, my sweet poetry sister.. ~Susan
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Date: 6/6/2021 2:09:00 AM
The same with me here, soul sister.. missing your unique works of art, your insightful feedbacks and your poetic feel that I truly connect to.. A beautiful soul of great worth, I see you a wonderful mother oozing a tender Love, a charming lady whose spirit a fountain of youth.. an amazing poetess whose talent and artistry l am in utter admiration! Thank you so much sweet Susan for the elating honour of your presence and great feedback! Stay always safe and happy. My deepest regards and blessings. Love and hugs.
Date: 6/2/2021 2:56:00 PM
Congratulations on POTD! Heartfelt!
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Date: 6/6/2021 1:16:00 AM
Dear Kim, you are of beauty and kindness to grant me your warm wishes.. Thank you so much! My deepest regards and blessings.
Date: 6/1/2021 6:19:00 AM
WoW! Besma, You got p.o.t.w too? Congratulations! Enjoy the honor and a wonderful day:-) Alexis
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Date: 6/2/2021 12:59:00 AM
Profuse thanks to you, Alexis, for your great beauty and support! So honoured by your return visit and deeply humbled by your kind and appreciative words.. My warmest wishes and deepest regards and blessings.
Date: 6/1/2021 3:16:00 AM
I can relate to this. You echo my thoughts. Rhyming poems done with difficulty that too with help of rhymezone. But your rhymes are splendid. Congratulations on potd. Enjoy the honour
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Date: 6/2/2021 12:57:00 AM
So kind and generous of you dear Rama, to honour the works of your fellow poets with your wonderful and rewarding feedbacks! Thank you so much. My deepest regards and blessings.
Date: 6/1/2021 2:25:00 AM
Wow. Wonderful writing. I love it. Congrats on POTD :) Love this so. God bless you always. Love, Gina
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Date: 6/2/2021 12:54:00 AM
Dear Regina, wonderful poetess! How honoured by your visit! How great to see you here with your so warm and praising response! I hold so dear your touching appreciation! Thank you so much! Looking forward to reading you.. My warmest wishes. Deepest regards and blessings. Love and hugs.
Date: 5/31/2021 10:19:00 PM
What a poignant tribute to your mother! So sorry for your loss, Besma. Blessings, Jennifer
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Date: 6/2/2021 12:50:00 AM
Despite our losses, we are blessed with the presence, care and Love of beautiful souls that heal and and a lot to us.. thank you so much, dear Jennifer, for your kindness and generosity and wonderful feedback! My deepest regards and blessings.
Date: 5/31/2021 7:51:00 PM
Back with congratulations on POTD. <3
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Date: 6/2/2021 12:45:00 AM
Dear Eve, I am so honoured by your visit and I am deeply grateful to you for the return graceful visit and warm congratulations.. Thank you so much beautiful lady! My warmest wishes. Love and hugs.
Date: 5/31/2021 6:52:00 PM
Wow! Congrats! Thanks for sharing this... delightful and delighting from the start till the end. We thank the Lord for giving us wondrous Moms, and for enabling us to be great Mamas likewise. God bless you.
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Date: 6/2/2021 12:42:00 AM
Dear Beata, I am the one thankful to you for the honour of your graceful presence and the beauty of your words! I join you in recognizing God's grace and blessings.. blessed we are with most precious mums, though no longer in my life, who sowed their very beautiful seeds.. Thank you so much dear poetess ! My deepest regards and blessings.
Date: 5/31/2021 1:56:00 PM
Besma, Honored like a prayer, the best mum. All the fine hearts bound in a psalm from Tunisia. -Richard
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Date: 6/2/2021 12:33:00 AM
I salute your beautiful soul and your poetic feel, Richard.. so honoured by your visit! So delighted by your wonderful feedback! Thank you so much! My deepest regards and blessings.
Date: 5/31/2021 12:18:00 PM
Fond Memory o Mother. It's Wonderful. Congratulations!
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Date: 6/2/2021 12:30:00 AM
The honour and pleasure are all mine! So happy my humbled words touched your poetic soul, Christuraj! Thank you so much! My deepest regards and blessings.
Date: 5/31/2021 12:13:00 PM
What a sweet, lovely remembrance of your Mum said from your heart. Congratulations
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Date: 6/2/2021 12:27:00 AM
Deeply elated and humbled by your beautiful and kind words of praise, dear Ann.. thank you so much for the honour of your visit.. My deepest regards and blessings.
Date: 5/31/2021 8:06:00 AM
Congratulations on your potd win. What a lovely/beautiful write. A wonderful tribute to your mother. Have a blessed day with your win............
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Date: 6/2/2021 12:23:00 AM
An immense pleasure and truly an honour to receive your highly appreciated compliment and congratulations, Paula.. thank you so much for your beauty! My deepest regards and blessings.
Date: 5/31/2021 7:57:00 AM
Dear Besma, your words shine brighter than the sun. So deserving of this honor, receiving Poem of the Day. Congratulations my dear sweet friend. Hugs and blessings. ~ Brandy
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Date: 6/2/2021 12:22:00 AM
I am truly relishing these delightful moments in time reading your wonderful and rewarding feedbacks! Thank you so much dear Brandy for such a shining presence and genuine feelings.. My warmest wishes. Love and hugs.
Date: 5/31/2021 7:47:00 AM
Beautiful tribute, Besma. So heartwarming ~ congrats on your well deserved POTD
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Date: 6/2/2021 12:15:00 AM
What an honour and a great delight! Thank you so much dear Line for your genuine appreciation and congratulations. My deepest regards and blessings.
Date: 5/31/2021 7:28:00 AM
I see you have achieved a POTW. What an achievement. My congratulations.
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Date: 6/1/2021 1:36:00 AM
I can't thank you enough, Victor for taking the time and showing care to gracefully be present and kindly congratulate my humble words! Thank you so much! My deepest regards and blessings.
Date: 5/31/2021 7:26:00 AM
You thoroughly deserve a POTD. You are one of the best poets on this site and it always an honour for me to read your meaningful poems certainly one of the best poems that grace this site. Regards and blessings. Victor
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Date: 6/1/2021 1:33:00 AM
I am in awe of your humility, generosity and kindness, Victor! What a valuable reward! Such an amazing appreciation from a great poet and beautiful soul! Deeply humbled, honoured and thankful.. Thank you heaps for your great support! My deepest regards and blessings.
Date: 5/31/2021 7:09:00 AM
Congratulations on potd and potw. Enjoy the honour. Take care, God bless!
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Besma Riabi Dziri
Date: 6/1/2021 1:29:00 AM
I am now enjoying your beautiful presence and response, Rama! Thank you so much for being here with your kind words! My deepest regards and blessings.
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