What I Feel

Crushed by despair, separated from the world, living in loneliness...
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Roper Avatar
April 4, 2016 at 9:36 AM
Love your verse,Brian, congratulations on your win!
Davey Avatar
April 7, 2016 at 4:34 AM
Thank you Eve
Dietrich Avatar
April 2, 2016 at 3:27 PM
I LOVED yours, one of the best ones, Brian. Congrats in the contest.
Davey Avatar
April 7, 2016 at 4:33 AM
Thank you Andrea I thought it would be a bit different than most others perception
Roper Avatar
April 1, 2016 at 9:51 PM
Wow! I love the emotional feelings! Congratulations on your win!
Davey Avatar
April 2, 2016 at 1:29 PM
Thank you Eve this little write was pretty packed with emotion you are right! Thank you for reading
Selfa Avatar
April 1, 2016 at 8:03 AM
When you write Brian, I really feel your overflowing passion in writing! You inspire so many people with your works and I'm so lucky I'm one of them! Thank you so much! Congratulations! :) _HANS
Davey Avatar
April 2, 2016 at 1:28 PM
Wow thank you for suck kind words and it makes my soul smile hearing those words that I actually inspire people with my poetry, your comment had definitely made my day
A. Sharma Avatar
April 1, 2016 at 1:37 AM
Congrats on ur superb win with this lovely write Brian..
Davey Avatar
April 2, 2016 at 1:25 PM
Thank you so much
Devnath  Avatar
March 31, 2016 at 3:53 PM
Congrats my lovely friend. Loved always, bl
Davey Avatar
March 31, 2016 at 4:05 PM
Thank you so much BL
Quigley Avatar
March 31, 2016 at 6:18 AM
Nice write!
Davey Avatar
March 31, 2016 at 1:48 PM
Thanks Tom
Allison Avatar
March 31, 2016 at 2:47 AM
Many congrats on your win Brian:-) hugs jan xx
Davey Avatar
March 31, 2016 at 1:47 PM
Thank you Jan
A   Avatar
March 31, 2016 at 12:31 AM
Brian, Congratulations on your Awesome Win. Stop by my blog "Invading," if you'd like. Drop a smile and tell me a little about your Monoku :) Always & Forever ~LINDA~
Davey Avatar
March 31, 2016 at 1:47 PM
Thanks for another wonderful contest Linda and I keep meaning to hit you up on your blog but I have never blogged anything before but I will get there my friend
Hicks Avatar
March 30, 2016 at 6:39 PM
Very fitting for the image, Brian. I felt despair, too, looking at that lighthouse that seemed (almost) to be in the middle of the sea! You captured it well.
Davey Avatar
March 31, 2016 at 1:45 PM
Thank you Timothy it is what I felt looking at the picture
Marcum Wong Avatar
March 29, 2016 at 1:11 AM
A moving melancholic Monoku Brian! ; )
Davey Avatar
March 31, 2016 at 1:44 PM
Thank you so much Connie
Kendrick Avatar
March 28, 2016 at 4:11 PM
I can feel the pain in this line..Way to go for the contest..Reads like a winner to me..Thanks for the visit to my page.Sara
Davey Avatar
March 31, 2016 at 1:43 PM
Thank you Sara I felt the despair looking at this picture
Onclaud Avatar
March 27, 2016 at 6:05 PM
live how the feeling of despair progressed, brian.. superbly rendered!.. huggs
Davey Avatar
March 28, 2016 at 2:15 AM
Thank you Nette I am glad you enjoyed it your comments are always highly regarded.
Dietrich Avatar
March 27, 2016 at 6:03 PM
too bad you can't post the picture with it so people don't think you are talking about yourself here.
Davey Avatar
March 28, 2016 at 2:14 AM
That's true but there had to be some truth in it for me to have that feeling but alas it was long ago and way in the past and I don't have any isolated feelings anymore in my life. Growth is wonderful, thanks again Andrea.
Dietrich Avatar
March 27, 2016 at 6:02 PM
you got it right. WEll done!!
Davey Avatar
March 28, 2016 at 2:12 AM
Thank you Andrea it is what I felt when I looked at the picture.
La France Avatar
March 27, 2016 at 10:48 AM
Brian, like your take on the image, it does have a loneliness to it, best of luck in the contest, I love this ~
Davey Avatar
March 27, 2016 at 5:09 PM
Thank you BW it was what the image made me feel as soon as I saw it
Turner Avatar
March 27, 2016 at 9:51 AM
This is sad Brian. Unfortunately I can relate. Peace my friend:)
Davey Avatar
March 27, 2016 at 5:04 PM
I think a touch of this type of sadness dwells in every writer my friend, you are not alone.
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