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What I Feel

Crushed by despair, separated from the world, living in loneliness...

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Eve Roper

Date: 4/4/2016 9:36:00 AM

Love your verse,Brian, congratulations on your win!

Brian Davey
Date: 4/7/2016 4:34:00 AM

Thank you Eve

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/2/2016 3:27:00 PM

I LOVED yours, one of the best ones, Brian. Congrats in the contest.

Brian Davey
Date: 4/7/2016 4:33:00 AM

Thank you Andrea I thought it would be a bit different than most others perception

Eve Roper

Date: 4/1/2016 9:51:00 PM

Wow! I love the emotional feelings! Congratulations on your win!

Brian Davey
Date: 4/2/2016 1:29:00 PM

Thank you Eve this little write was pretty packed with emotion you are right! Thank you for reading

Hansteven Selfa

Date: 4/1/2016 8:03:00 AM

When you write Brian, I really feel your overflowing passion in writing! You inspire so many people with your works and I'm so lucky I'm one of them! Thank you so much! Congratulations! :) _HANS

Brian Davey
Date: 4/2/2016 1:28:00 PM

Wow thank you for suck kind words and it makes my soul smile hearing those words that I actually inspire people with my poetry, your comment had definitely made my day

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 4/1/2016 1:37:00 AM

Congrats on ur superb win with this lovely write Brian..

Brian Davey
Date: 4/2/2016 1:25:00 PM

Thank you so much

Bl Devnath

Date: 3/31/2016 3:53:00 PM

Congrats my lovely friend. Loved always, bl

Brian Davey
Date: 3/31/2016 4:05:00 PM

Thank you so much BL

Tom Quigley

Date: 3/31/2016 6:18:00 AM

Nice write!

Brian Davey
Date: 3/31/2016 1:48:00 PM

Thanks Tom

Jan Allison

Date: 3/31/2016 2:47:00 AM

Many congrats on your win Brian:-) hugs jan xx

Brian Davey
Date: 3/31/2016 1:47:00 PM

Thank you Jan

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 3/31/2016 12:31:00 AM

Brian, Congratulations on your Awesome Win. Stop by my blog "Invading," if you'd like. Drop a smile and tell me a little about your Monoku :) Always & Forever ~LINDA~

Brian Davey
Date: 3/31/2016 1:47:00 PM

Thanks for another wonderful contest Linda and I keep meaning to hit you up on your blog but I have never blogged anything before but I will get there my friend

Timothy Hicks

Date: 3/30/2016 6:39:00 PM

Very fitting for the image, Brian. I felt despair, too, looking at that lighthouse that seemed (almost) to be in the middle of the sea! You captured it well.

Brian Davey
Date: 3/31/2016 1:45:00 PM

Thank you Timothy it is what I felt looking at the picture

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 3/29/2016 1:11:00 AM

A moving melancholic Monoku Brian! ; )

Brian Davey
Date: 3/31/2016 1:44:00 PM

Thank you so much Connie

Sara Kendrick

Date: 3/28/2016 4:11:00 PM

I can feel the pain in this line..Way to go for the contest..Reads like a winner to me..Thanks for the visit to my page.Sara

Brian Davey
Date: 3/31/2016 1:43:00 PM

Thank you Sara I felt the despair looking at this picture

Nette Onclaud

Date: 3/27/2016 6:05:00 PM

live how the feeling of despair progressed, brian.. superbly rendered!.. huggs

Brian Davey
Date: 3/28/2016 2:15:00 AM

Thank you Nette I am glad you enjoyed it your comments are always highly regarded.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/27/2016 6:03:00 PM

too bad you can't post the picture with it so people don't think you are talking about yourself here.

Brian Davey
Date: 3/28/2016 2:14:00 AM

That's true but there had to be some truth in it for me to have that feeling but alas it was long ago and way in the past and I don't have any isolated feelings anymore in my life. Growth is wonderful, thanks again Andrea.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/27/2016 6:02:00 PM

you got it right. WEll done!!

Brian Davey
Date: 3/28/2016 2:12:00 AM

Thank you Andrea it is what I felt when I looked at the picture.